Reviews for FFX Origins of a Hero
ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 9 . 2/24/2008
yey! :D go tidus! go tidus! (does a little dance) lol, what more can i say? i love this story, and if you don't update soon i'll send the evil eye after you! x x x
ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 8 . 2/20/2008
eheh my internet broke so it took me forever to read and review...lol sorry

anyways, lol seymour got told! XD that was funny, kai's an awesome character, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! :D x x x
Lennatha chapter 7 . 2/15/2008
Aww!

That was so cute at the end! I found the chapter to be sweet. I still like the way how you bring Kai into the story, specially with the conversation with Wakka and Lulu.

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Lennatha
ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 7 . 2/9/2008
aww yey! :) little bit short but hey, i loved the ending, good job! ;) ps, you didn't answer my question: does it make you update faster if i review more? upadte soon! x
Lennatha chapter 6 . 2/4/2008
I'm NOT reviewing while reading...

okay I am, but so what? xD

the speed bit was awesome xD

but... what's the... o it's cool...

haha... awesome, I like that move he did... use it more often...

YAY KIMAHRI ACTION! - I hadn't read much of him! if he had been involved... I hadn't noticed 'cause he wasn't in the spot light xP

lol

AWW I love the little brother sister moment - it always makes me smile -

Update soon kay? -
Lennatha chapter 5 . 2/4/2008
Haha, great ending. 'ding' xD

but yeah, I liked how Kai was so kind and cocky in this lol...

MORE TIDUS AND KAI TALKS! -

The two make me laugh -
Lennatha chapter 4 . 2/4/2008
To be honest...

that's a short chapter for you Oli...

Good though! I was pleased you kept the underwater fight scene Tidus and Wakka, though I am curious as to what it might have been like with Kai...

But... does he even... I don't know how to explain it _

Have the ability underwater like Tidus and Water?

...

haha

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Lennatha
ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 6 . 2/3/2008
yey they beat it! :D and Tidus got paid for his services lol i knda feel sorry for wakka cause he keeps being proven wrong (evil grin) it's funny when kai does it cause everyone knows he get away with it :) UPDATE SOON! p.s. does it make you update faster if i reviewing move then once? ;) x
ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 5 . 1/30/2008
i can't wait to see what tidus does next ;) ps please please please PLEASE update soon! *puppy dog eyes* pwease?

yey tidus kicked butt again :D i like kai he's awseome. lol it'd be funny if kai turned round at the end of the battle and handed over half the money to him (hint hint, nudge nudge, cough cough) so sorry, *ahem* i have a bad cold XD lol update soon!:D
Lennatha chapter 3 . 1/29/2008
Okay Oli,

you enjoy writing your battle scenes a little bit much...

IFREEKINGLOVETHEM!

More...

PLZKAYTHANX!

... xD

now to read the next chapter! xD

Lennatha
ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 4 . 1/23/2008
good :) tidus kicks butt XD then promptly faints :) i like it. all i'd say is its a bit short, then again writing long chapters can be a pain, i know that. can't wait to see what happens next! :D
ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 3 . 1/19/2008
good good...who am i kidding? BRILLIANT! heheh, you're really good at describing fight scenes and stuff, something i can't do. update soon! i really like this story :p hey after this one you could do a FFX2 one aswell :p you'd be really good at that
ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 2 . 1/17/2008
sorry it took so long for me to fidn out you were writing this XD omg i think you're a brialliant writer you should deffinantly keep going with this :) kai fits in like he was there all along ;) keep up the brilliant wokr and up date soon! x
Lennatha chapter 2 . 1/13/2008
aww! I love this... Kai fits in so perfectly!

I thought the way you went into detail of yuna looking to Kai for help (in a way) so cute! You've really made him fit into the story line very well and I want another chapter.

NOWW! -angelic face- -points to halo- xD

UPDATE OR FEAR THE EVIL STICK OF DOOM! -

Lennatha

p.s... -GLOMPS- xD
Lennatha chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
...

-holding in squeals-

...

screw it...

HOMIGODITWASSOCOOL!I'!

You can translate that ;]

ANYWAY... except glomps and many many pokes till i get a new character...

HOMIGODKAIISSOAWESOME!

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Lennatha

UPDATE

btw... I liked the cockyness and how Tidus was shocked that Kai was holding back xD

UPDATE!

xD
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