|Reviews for Edges|
| MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Awwwwwwwwwww! I love this! Oh Marauders...
| MissEMT chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
wonderful! a truly heart-wrenching story.
| Remona chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Absolutely lovely just a great story. Well done xxx
| Nightwhisper chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Wow. This was wonderful. You had me speechless..
Now I need to go read something cheerful, or I won't be able to sleep.
| mjamodeo chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
This was so beautiful! The end, especially.
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Oh wow!That was so so beautifully written out!I just love how everything here was,the conversations,the emotions,the events!everything!
| LilyLOVESProngs chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
that was beautiful. u r an amazing writer. bittersweet, well written. u characterised everyone so perfectly. i have no bad comment to this. u captured their emotions beautifully. i loved their conversations, remus' memories. oh remus...i feel so sad for him, and i understand how he feels that his friends dont trust him. makes me just hate voldemort more, this fic.
| Miga chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
| alirodina chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
I just read this last night, and I must say that the scene where Sirius and Remus talk about the past in Grimmauld Place, that was exactly one thing that I wonder about: What do two friends talk about, when they have gone through so much but are still together? Do they blame each other for what happened? I like how you made them comfortable with each other, not awkward, trying to reach out, meeting halfway. So beautiful.
And the part where Sirius says that Remus loves Lily in a different way, I loved that. When he gave Lily a present that she wanted as herself, and not one defined by who she is. You have a very sharp eye, looking into the human psyche and emotions, every character's motivations. I loved this fic!
| Louey06 chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
That was so sweet and touching. The end was amazing. I agree with the parft about peter. That he and Wormtail are two different people.
| hysterekal00 chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
one word- wow.
| The Muffin With No Name chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
i loved your characterisation of Remus and the other Marauders, good job! (:
| Miga chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
I’ve recently discovered you here on and I really enjoy your stories. But so far Edges is my favourite. I like the way you describe Remus, I think very few authors on this site is capable of describing him well. Often he just comes out weak and as a victim, which I think is totally wrong. But you manage to describe him as a man who, although live gave him a pretty bad hand, manage to fight the obstacles of life and get a, maybe not completely happy, but at least a good life.
I hope you continue writing stories for the Harry Potter universe.
| Polar Deer chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
| hydraspit chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Wow. That was lovely. I really enjoyed the dialog between Remus and Sirius it seemed perfectly in character and fit nicely into canon.
I particularly enjoyed the way you captured the emotions in this fic, and the way they changed during the way. The way that they all felt at various points during the war was very realistic and exquisitely captured.
One tiny canon problem, I'm pretty sure that they did not know about the Dark Mark during the first war. In the fourth book when Harry talks about Snape showing something on his forearm to the Durmstrang headmaster Sirius seemed to have no idea what he was talking about. But that is really only a little canon issue. And I could be wrong.
I also really liked how you wrote about Peter at the end. I always enjoy it when fanfic authors acknowledge that at one time Peter was a Marauder and was a good friend.
I am completely in awe of your talent. I went to bed last night thinking you wrote amazingly funny fanfics, but I am pleasantly surprised this morning to find that you can also write fanfics that bring tears to my eyes. Very well done.