|Reviews for Fated|
| Rin28 chapter 14 . 7/13/2010
Nooo! this is one of the few stories where I actually like nanako!
| Rin28 chapter 12 . 7/12/2010
YEY! I'm glad Fuji and Echizen got at least one night together!
I don't know how Echizen does it, i wouldn't be able to keep my paws of Fuji!
| Rin28 chapter 10 . 7/12/2010
Hey! I just wanted to drop a word in and tell you how much I'm enjoying this story so far! I'm excited to see what happens with Fuji and Echizen in LA!...so is it decided that Echizen will be the top? Personally I would like Fuji to be top. My reasoning is this- Echizen is already a leader in the business world and he is a powerful person that other people should be aware of. He is supposed to keep strong for the sake of his goals. Because of his strong presence in the business side I would like it if he relaxed and let Fuji take lead in the bedroom at least. I guess I'm just used to the manipulative side of Fuji :) and don't want him to get led around. Anyway I had a question - and I'm sorry if you have had this question before and hate repeating yourself or if it is answered in the chapters I havent read yet- does fuji play tennis in this story? I would really like to read a scene where he goes against Echizen and beats him (and he wins a bet with a reward at the end *wink*)!...aah I'm starting to drift to lala land! sigh...Here's more proof of how much I like Fuji taking the lead. Anyway I seem to have rambled on and strayed from topic so I'm sorry if you got bored reading through all this. Maybe I should of made more reviews at the begining so that this one wouldn't have been so long! Anyhoos, Love the story! You are doing a great job!
| yume229 chapter 16 . 6/19/2010
Love this story! Hope you would still update!
| xXHalfPrinceXx chapter 14 . 6/4/2010
Great story so far! I was wondering something; towards the end of the chapter, you said that Kamui and Ryosuke were orphans now. Were Shun and Nanako the parents of both of them? I know Ryosuke is their son, but what about Kamui?
| AishiteruAkumaSama chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
The perfect song to go with this chapter is "Taking my money back" by Utada Hikaru :D
| denizen of the night chapter 16 . 12/7/2009
Hmm… It’s a bit hard to understand since I’m not a business major, so I kind of skipped through the majority of the parts where there’s a lot of jargons about business and them talking about business whatnots, sorry… Nonetheless, I still liked it! I’m now wondering what Ryoma’s goal is and what role will Ai be playing in his scheme… So I hope you could update SOON…(and yeah, that needs capitalization for emphasis…. This also applies to your other fics, which I think by the way are great too!)…
| lilgurlanima chapter 16 . 12/5/2009
i wonder when will ryoma know about namorou making his moves to his cousin? hope he knows soon...
| animelover4ever69 chapter 16 . 12/1/2009
Good story...but you changed Ai's last name. Is it Takeuchi (Chapter 15)or is it Shitetsu (Chapter 16)?
| irishKaoru chapter 16 . 12/1/2009
Have i ever mentioned that i simply love your stories. So few people bother to go so in depth with what they are writing. But when i read your work it is like i am being swept into another world.
| MARYLOVER chapter 16 . 11/29/2009
Is it just me or the story is about to make a turn to other level? The characters are facing difficult moments and that's good because they're testing them, and as you've made an intrincate web of situations liking all of them, well, one trouble one of them have, it will definitely get to the other ones.
Now I want to know what's on your mind for the next step this story is taking, and I'm thrilled about it, no matter whether there's less FujiRyo, the plot is well-enough to forget the lack of it... but don't forget to give us some of it once in a while! Bye
| Chintzy chapter 16 . 11/28/2009
You finally updated!D Keep going!
| RebeccasanFujiEijiLVR chapter 16 . 11/27/2009
| Gyokuei Kuragari chapter 16 . 11/26/2009
Before I Read:
XD Still no update on Club 7. I you have a pretty lengthy chapter here, hopefully it's a good one. ] Heh, I totally forgot what happened in the last chapter. Oh well. x]
Hahaha, it always does help to lift tension with a Ryoma vs. Atobe or a Fuji Brothers argument, ah? Heh.
It really sucks for Ryosuke though. D:
Mm, not much for me to comment on this time, besides the fact that you're story is great, as usual. ]
Damn, your character list is seriously getting way too long. XD
| RuByMoOn17 chapter 16 . 11/26/2009
Hope Ryoma can take down his enemies once and for all