|Reviews for Under An Umbrella|
| Pixy Black chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
Really good and so sweet i think my teeth are rotting!
In a good way...
| rekahneko chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
Love this one!
My favorite of your so far.
I particularly love how there is anger and awkwardness and yet, it all works out somehow and in a cute way, too.
| Riku-Rocks chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
This story is rather nice. I like the themes and characterisation. The conversation between the two is realistic and fitting. There are several missin gwords throughout this piece, but the pace does not suffer too much over that. The grammatical errors do not distract from the plot, and the story as a whole is enjoyable.