Reviews for The Chapters of Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. What's up with Jareth's hands? please update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() Oh my god! Update! It got to be my birthday or Christmas. Whatever. I really enjoyed this chapter and I love your writing style. Is very refreshing. EEk! Keith is giving me the creeps... with him knowing so much about Sarah's dream and having mismatched eyes like Jareth. And Jareth knows nothing of his existence! He's creepy and I hate him. I really hope he gets driven over by several trains in consecutive sequence. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to hear that you're feeling better. Until again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. I like it and it has some very good parts. It's very imaginative. please update soon. I have the same problem with updates. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() No need to be our slave forever, your story is still going in for the first chance! I'm so happy you updated, this chapter was so cute and intense! I can't wait to know how it'll developpe from this point on. By the way, i wanted to know, do you speak french?(Because of all the things going on about Le Petit prince (which i happen to have read in secondary 3 for my french exam and since then, i always shudder when seeing the name... XD) |
![]() ![]() Lovely story. I really enjoy the way you portrait the characters. I would love to know of Jareth's personal experience of running his own labyrinth in order to be king. I would also like to know of annoying Keith's real identity and hope that then he gets driven over by a moving truck (a girl can dream, can't she?). Please, update soon! If you're really sorry for taking so long for this last update then your best way to show it is by updating faster. That way we may forgive you and give you more reviews (aren't you a review-vampire? *wink wink* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story and I really like. The storytelling is excellently done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unbelievable cool, and good. Keep smiling. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. Please update soon, this story rocks. I got it in my favs... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I'm hoping you will continue, because I just found this story for the first time and I am completely hooked! I love it and it is so original! Thanks for keeping it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I just came across your story and read it all in one sitting. Amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aug! My writers block has gotten so bad that I can not even write a decent review! I hope you can live with "great chapter", cause thats all I got. |
![]() ![]() Holy moly. You write beautifully. Seriously? The "good parts" are yet to come? I think we've had plenty of excellent moments already (especially in this chapter!). I'm anxious for the next update, of course, but glad you're feeling better too. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() How could I give you a second chance when I'm already totally devoted to your story? I'm just so glad that you're back! Trust me, I know the feeling of trying to get an update posted and falling behind. Woo, boy, do I know... But you're back now, so hurray! And this was an outstanding chapter. Jareth and Sarah, lounging on her bed together...I had butterflies, just like Sarah did. Welcome back, and keep up the fabulous work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |