Reviews for The Chapters of Life |
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![]() ![]() Fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for writing a good chapter. I enjoyed it much. So keep smiling and writing. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i can feel the intensity building up. I like how you wrote Jareth in this chapter. He's himself but he's more mysterious than ever and you've definitely got the chemestry building between him and Sarah. I can't wait for the next chapter so update soon! AG |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah! a new chapter! Jareth sure knows what to give as a present to be apart from the others! And with the letter, he sure is able to stay mysterious as always! (And Sarah is so lucky to have him for personal teacher in the art of crystal maneuvring XD *is that a word?) Continue with your great, sweet story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A cliffie-run away! UPDATE SOON OR I SHALL SEND MY ARMY OF HAVOC-WREAKING KEEBLER ELVES TO FORCE YOU INTO AN UPDATE! Great chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Suspense again? *pouts and holds out a note* My doctor says I'm not asupposed ta be in suspense, it's bad for my heart. *smiles innocently until a goblin pops up* Goblin: ITS NOT FROM HER DOCTOR! IT'S A TRICK! :O FRICKEN GOBLIN! *kicks goblin and dissappears* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter, my goodness is cool. Keep up the good work. Keep smiling. :-)More please soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! What a nice, fantastic story! Jareth as a teen, that's a must see XD It is a really good story, and i hope you'll be able to upload any time soon! Like you said in the comments at the end, there's some lingering questions that longed to be answered! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter-too much cliffhanger! UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() Crashed? Oh dear. Our dear Jareth didn't get drunk did he? :) or possibly injured... :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() dang! you've defiantly got a good mystery on your hands here. update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very nice chapter, although I'm just as confused as to what game Sarah is playing at. I look forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's an evil cliffie, I'll have you know. Hm... he walks toward the woods and then the owl crashes into her room... did he simply need the distance to get a good fly on? Interesting. One thing... I'm not sure they had gift cards back then. In fact I think they didn't. That would be, what? 1988? No, I don't think they had them, and I don't think gift CERTIFICATES were wisely circulated, either, especially not by teens. I know nowadays it's a common and convenient gift, but not then. Gotta watch for that kind of stuff. No iPOD, no Starbucks, no gift cards. Otherwise, great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *cue dramatic organ music* O so many questions! |