Reviews for The Chapters of Life
Nette chapter 5 . 1/17/2008
Fantastic!
notwritten chapter 5 . 1/17/2008
Thank you for writing a good chapter. I enjoyed it much. So keep smiling and writing. :-)
AvitarGirl chapter 5 . 1/17/2008
i can feel the intensity building up. I like how you wrote Jareth in this chapter. He's himself but he's more mysterious than ever and you've definitely got the chemestry building between him and Sarah. I can't wait for the next chapter so update soon!

AG
Norehnka chapter 5 . 1/17/2008
Yeah! a new chapter! Jareth sure knows what to give as a present to be apart from the others! And with the letter, he sure is able to stay mysterious as always! (And Sarah is so lucky to have him for personal teacher in the art of crystal maneuvring XD *is that a word?)

Continue with your great, sweet story!
Crystal Shores chapter 5 . 1/17/2008
A cliffie-run away!

UPDATE SOON OR I SHALL SEND MY ARMY OF HAVOC-WREAKING KEEBLER ELVES TO FORCE YOU INTO AN UPDATE!

Great chapter! :)
CoffeeKris chapter 5 . 1/17/2008
Suspense again? *pouts and holds out a note* My doctor says I'm not asupposed ta be in suspense, it's bad for my heart. *smiles innocently until a goblin pops up*

Goblin: ITS NOT FROM HER DOCTOR! IT'S A TRICK!

:O FRICKEN GOBLIN! *kicks goblin and dissappears*
notwritten chapter 4 . 1/16/2008
This chapter, my goodness is cool. Keep up the good work. Keep smiling. :-)More please soon!
Norehnka chapter 4 . 1/16/2008
Oh! What a nice, fantastic story! Jareth as a teen, that's a must see XD It is a really good story, and i hope you'll be able to upload any time soon! Like you said in the comments at the end, there's some lingering questions that longed to be answered!
Crystal Shores chapter 4 . 1/16/2008
Great chapter-too much cliffhanger! UPDATE SOON!
Nette chapter 4 . 1/16/2008
Crashed? Oh dear. Our dear Jareth didn't get drunk did he? :) or possibly injured... :/
AvitarGirl chapter 4 . 1/16/2008
dang! you've defiantly got a good mystery on your hands here. update soon!
WE'VE STARTED A TREND chapter 4 . 1/16/2008
I love this so far!
hazlgrnLizzy chapter 4 . 1/16/2008
A very nice chapter, although I'm just as confused as to what game Sarah is playing at.

I look forward to the next chapter!
ShadowyLined chapter 4 . 1/16/2008
That's an evil cliffie, I'll have you know. Hm... he walks toward the woods and then the owl crashes into her room... did he simply need the distance to get a good fly on? Interesting.

One thing... I'm not sure they had gift cards back then. In fact I think they didn't. That would be, what? 1988? No, I don't think they had them, and I don't think gift CERTIFICATES were wisely circulated, either, especially not by teens. I know nowadays it's a common and convenient gift, but not then. Gotta watch for that kind of stuff. No iPOD, no Starbucks, no gift cards.

Otherwise, great story!
CoffeeKris chapter 4 . 1/16/2008
*cue dramatic organ music* O so many questions!
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