Reviews for The Chapters of Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i have to admit, this is my favourite story that ive read :D well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still think Keith should be flattened under a bus. He set out to mess with Sarah because he felt a magic connection within her. No other reason. Plus, flattened under a bus would be more merciful than the death he probably faces now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well done! I highly suggest you should find the time to write a sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. Though the whole Keith plotline confused me greatly, it wasn't too hard to follow. Epilouge? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you wrote this two years ago, but this is a great story. I like the way you wrote the story, the plot was well-concieved. Your characterization was very good, and descriptions were very good. Thumbs way up, and this is definetly going to be a favorite of mine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a wonderful story, I truly enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start to the story! I'm hooked. I normally don't leave reviews, but I thought this chapter deserved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOw that was intense. That chapter would've made a fabulous psychological thriller movie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Their banter is lovely, but I worry it is moving too slowly (not a criticism, just my thoughts as I'm reading)...he needs to spice things up a little in order to provoke her true feelings! He's running out of time... |
![]() ![]() ![]() The tension at the end was delicious. I think I was holding my breath the entire time! I wish Sarah would talk to Jareth about Keith. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah! Now I am all confused again. Okay, so I still think Keith is the human sent by the Labyrinth, but because he was sent by the Labyrinth, he is like a mortal Jareth? Or is he Fey? Or maybe he is Jareth after all? So confuzeed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so Keith is actually the human challenger? BUt he seems so sinister... Just glad he is not Jareth! Sarah can beat the Labyrinth! Go Sarah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, jittery butterflies were back in FULL FORCE again with this chapter. It rocked, hard! Jareth asking to court her was sublime. More! :) |