Reviews for The Chapters of Life
AnnaHarlin chapter 16 . 11/23/2012
i have to admit, this is my favourite story that ive read :D well done
Kyndsie chapter 14 . 9/8/2012
I still think Keith should be flattened under a bus. He set out to mess with Sarah because he felt a magic connection within her. No other reason.

Plus, flattened under a bus would be more merciful than the death he probably faces now.
hisangel18 chapter 16 . 8/7/2012
Very well done! I highly suggest you should find the time to write a sequel.
HRHPrincessTricia chapter 16 . 11/7/2011
Loved it. Though the whole Keith plotline confused me greatly, it wasn't too hard to follow. Epilouge?
Dark Horse Writer chapter 16 . 10/12/2010
I know you wrote this two years ago, but this is a great story. I like the way you wrote the story, the plot was well-concieved. Your characterization was very good, and descriptions were very good. Thumbs way up, and this is definetly going to be a favorite of mine.
seniastardust chapter 16 . 9/22/2010
This was a wonderful story, I truly enjoyed reading it.
Lady Azura chapter 16 . 8/10/2010
I really liked this. Good job!
Nicky-Mouse chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Great start to the story! I'm hooked. I normally don't leave reviews, but I thought this chapter deserved it :)
EmeraldRomance chapter 16 . 3/1/2010
Loved it!
EmeraldRomance chapter 15 . 3/1/2010
WOw that was intense. That chapter would've made a fabulous psychological thriller movie!
EmeraldRomance chapter 10 . 3/1/2010
Their banter is lovely, but I worry it is moving too slowly (not a criticism, just my thoughts as I'm reading)...he needs to spice things up a little in order to provoke her true feelings! He's running out of time...
EmeraldRomance chapter 9 . 3/1/2010
The tension at the end was delicious. I think I was holding my breath the entire time!

I wish Sarah would talk to Jareth about Keith.
EmeraldRomance chapter 8 . 3/1/2010
Gah! Now I am all confused again. Okay, so I still think Keith is the human sent by the Labyrinth, but because he was sent by the Labyrinth, he is like a mortal Jareth? Or is he Fey? Or maybe he is Jareth after all? So confuzeed!
EmeraldRomance chapter 7 . 3/1/2010
Okay, so Keith is actually the human challenger? BUt he seems so sinister...

Just glad he is not Jareth!

Sarah can beat the Labyrinth! Go Sarah!
EmeraldRomance chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
Okay, jittery butterflies were back in FULL FORCE again with this chapter. It rocked, hard! Jareth asking to court her was sublime.

More! :)
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