Reviews for The Chapters of Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() My favorite part of this chapter was when Jareth forced her to take the crystal and then was so calm and sweet about it. Looking forward to where this conversation is going...hoping we won't see anymore Keith. (Why would she want a boy when she can have a king? Just his way of being close to her?) Unless I'm completely off base, that is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keith Jareth? Am I right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, when she cried out his name I actually had tears in my eyes, the emotions were so powerful. However, their little exchange broke the momentum a little. Too many vague statements to keep the flow going as smoothly as I wanted, and of course, now I'm more confused than ever. Sarah does make a good point about worrying that Jareth just wants to please her. We'll see what happens... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy cow, this just might be the best first chapter of a story I've read...EVER! And I'm not just talking fanfiction. OMG, I am SO there with Sarah and her emotions. The bracelet? You had me melting into a pile of goo. The book is ingenious...although I think it might have been cooler if she couldn't read ahead because he only 'published' to the book once a day. Regardless, it is an awesome, awesome premise! What a cool way for her to get to know his thoughts? I am a little confused...she knows it's Jareth right? She just wants to deny it? Wow, my heart is pounding. I really, really hope the rest of the story lives up to this. LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did... Did Keith just DIE? |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOP! tht was well worth the time it took up to read :P thnx for the great read n dont worry it all makes sence now :D:D welldone ! TichTich2 |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay this chapter has really sorta confused me jst a tad i get most of it but it was confusing anywhome i must read on it is a good read still :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! GREAT JOB is there going to be a sequa? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good plot! Loved the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A marvelously, and enchantingly told tale. I look forward to being to read more from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was pretty enjoyable lol. A nice read. Is it weird that I don't mind Keith? lol I don't mind love triangles (even though that wasn't much of a love triangle...really) if the girl has the options XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice! even better than I remembered, and I congratulate you on having the discipline to finish it - I never would have! misunderstoodemon |
![]() ![]() i like you story, but please proof read. errors are distracting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A wonderful story! Loved it and it asked many of the same questions I've had when thinking about fanfics and such. Great writing though in some parts it seemed a littled rushed. all togeather one of the best fics I've seen! |