Reviews for Making A Home
InkHeart17 chapter 4 . 12/16/2008
Wow. Took me through charming, wistful, playful, then intense moods. Carlisle furious; what an intriguing (and somewhat scary) moment.
InkHeart17 chapter 3 . 12/16/2008
I really enjoyed "The essence of human life is a deep red..." concept. I guess I always just distinguished the physicality of blood as human-red and animal-gold, not essence; I like that. One question, is Esme still in the sheet? Or did she tackle that deer naked? I was just trying to build the scene in my head and I didn't know if the boys were trying to ignore her state of undress or not. And I liked the housekeeping thoughts part best!
InkHeart17 chapter 2 . 12/16/2008
I like how Edward still speaks like early twentieth century here. "despite your startling good looks I’m still not attracted to men" made me laugh.
InkHeart17 chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Excellent opening chapter. You can really understand Carlisle's motivations for the decision to change Esme.
Wild Child 1954 chapter 10 . 12/13/2008
I was enjoying this story very much - and all of a sudden it stopped! Will you be finishing this at any time? It really would be nice to see how it progresses.
aem91 chapter 10 . 12/11/2008
LovesTheHeat chapter 9 . 12/6/2008
i finally got some time to finish this chapter. while it's hard for me to read because i'm into into Carlise and Esme, i find myself drawed to this - it's so brilliant and intelligant. you've created the charactors brilliantly and stuck with what SM set up. i'm just... taken aback about how real they seem.

you're doing a fabulous job. (:
SaladOrCellarDoor chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
This story is one of my favorite fanfictions ever! It's intelligent and refreshing, and I just couldn't stop once I started. I know you haven't updated in a while, but there is really nothing like this anywhere else, so if there is any way you can go back to this, it would make me so happy! (Along with others, I'm sure.) You have wonderful characterizations and bring a great warmth to Esme and Carlisle.
Nostalgia-in-Starlight chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
This is very good. You did a very fine job.
Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 10 . 12/2/2008
oh man I have no time at all! I am really happy I got to read this to day I made my day just a little better. I really hope I can get back to your other story soon to. please update soon!
ggggggggggggg chapter 10 . 11/16/2008
I love the idea of doing a carlilse/esme story and even though a ton of people have done it this is the best one i have read yet. you do a really good job of getting the way they talk to sound 1920's.
LovesTheHeat chapter 10 . 10/19/2008
ah i love it! this is really something. it's well written and in charactor. i can feel esme, carlise, and edward just jump from the page!

i'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes. again, you really have something here.

absolutley brilliant.

udpate soon! i can't wait. (:
dsolo chapter 10 . 10/18/2008
ARRGHH! A cliffhanger, and you haven't updated in nearly 2 months. I hope you and your family are doing well. I'm hooked, and can't wait to see what happens next. This is an amazing story.
dsolo chapter 9 . 10/18/2008
Can't review. Crying.
dsolo chapter 8 . 10/18/2008
Your writing has not suffered due to your family concerns. I am reading this story 2 months later, so I hope they have resolved.
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