|Reviews for Making A Home|
| dsolo chapter 4 . 10/18/2008
OOH. Sick or not, this chapter is great. I got tears in my eyes at Esme's reactions. I felt sorry for everyone.
| dsolo chapter 3 . 10/18/2008
Was Esme still naked? You captured the emotions very well. I also liked Edward having a Bugatti. I've always thought he would have had the most up to date and fastest automobile of whichever era he was in.
| dsolo chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Love the Carlisle POV, especially as he considers if Esme was eligible for heaven as a suicide. I hadn't ever considered that angle. Two minor quibbles, her maiden name was Platt, not Pratt and she was brought to the hospital morgue, but Carlisle heard her heart still beating. As I said, minor, and since his seeing her fall is a plot point, probably not important.
| Midlight17 chapter 10 . 10/15/2008
I love this story - I SO want to find out what happens next! I discovered you via Cullenista - two thumbs up!
Esme's story is quite heartbreaking, but quite believable.
I was so sad when Edward's piano was wrecked! The way you describe his character fits well with the Twilight saga, it's so enjoyable to read this. It's almost 1am and I couldn't stop reading (that's one way I judge a good story - I can't sleep until I finish!)
Just don't forget that Edward also has some of his mother's jewelry...but I'm sure the piano was more personal as it was a gift for him from her (I assume) whereas the Jewelry was only hers. But maybe something you could write into the story? Many possibilities.
I look foward to more! I think Charles needs his neck snapped by angry Vampires...but I'm sure Carlisle will find a revenge that still keeps his humanity. Or maybe this is when Edward finally slips up...or maybe Esme can kick his *arse*...OH I just can't wait! Love it!
| Pass the Porn Tea chapter 10 . 10/9/2008
Very enjoyable. I think fics that don't really include Bella in any way (because I feel people can't portray their relationship properly) are the only sorts I can read, and this is an exceptional one. Thank you for writing it, and I hope to see an update soon!
| 93UnholyConfessions chapter 10 . 10/8/2008
This fic is just amazing! You have portrayed Carlisle, Edward and Esme beautifully and your style of writing is stunning! WOW. I will not even try to say how much i LOVE it as my command of the english language is paled in comparison to yours and i would not want to embarrass myself!
Really though, this is the best fic i have ever read from carlisles point of view and one of the best i have ever read full-stop!
Please update soon! I am glad you and your family have recovered and hope you have the time to write more as it would be a terrifc shame if you couldn't! Again, wonderful story...
p.s how long is it going to be? Will you write about Rosalie, Emmett, Alice and Jasper too? Please do! I can't wait to read the rest! Thanks for taking the time to write this fic!
| dlhk chapter 10 . 9/24/2008
This story is incredible. seriously. I remember that I had read the first couple of chapters way back when, and then I had never read the rest. I found this update on my email and so I just started the whole thing over. It is wonderful. I love it, am totally addicted, and am begging for more. WHAT THE HECK ARE THEY GOING TO DO NOW?
i'm worried. seriously. you are so creative and so talented. I cried... seriously cried when Esme broke Edward's piano and there were a couple of times I was close. Excellent. -mommyofboth
| Bella1111 chapter 10 . 9/21/2008
Great chapter! I love the story of Esme and Carlisle - it is not written about much. I personally hope Charles shows up and Carlisle "takes care" of the problem. Please update again!
| Sumomo14 chapter 9 . 9/18/2008
| Sumomo14 chapter 8 . 9/18/2008
This story rocks! I love the idea of it beinf just Edward, Carlilse, and Esme! Update soon!
| borntodanceninefour chapter 10 . 9/18/2008
O! Nice! update plz!
| sunnydae13 chapter 10 . 9/11/2008
This is a very enjoyable story... I hope for more soon...
| NooooBD chapter 10 . 9/8/2008
MORE, MORE, MORE!
That Charles, I don't think I've hated a character as much since Umbridge from Harry Potter. XD
| Tai Birdsong chapter 9 . 9/6/2008
This chapter was just... Wow. I never thought that a /piano/ of all things could make me cry, but Edward's pain was so tangible, so heartbreaking, that you had me sobbing. Amazing job.
You, my friend, have a gift, that you should treasure for the rest of your life. Use it well (jedi!)
| account no longer valid chapter 10 . 9/6/2008
awesome story! I love how you are pulling Charles back into the story! Update soon!