|Reviews for The Cybertronian Bug|
| Lambor Terror Lep chapter 4 . 2/17/2012
chapter 1-4 were awsome can't wait for an update
| mandy chapter 4 . 2/4/2011
when is this going to be a update of this story. this is a good story.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/29/2011
| CosmicEssence chapter 4 . 5/26/2010
interesting...fav part was the chaos regarding the space bridge and the mechs being unable to touch electrical parts.
| Please Note chapter 4 . 8/3/2009
You’ve structured a rather interesting yet slightly funny premise here with good characterization. I.E. …
1. Prime’s sacrificial nature is intact.
2. Shockwave managing to insult Spike despite his illness.
3. Spike Witwicky’s concern for the health of his friends.
But, on the other hand, this story would certainly benefit from some altercations. Before you continue on, the choppy sentence structure, spelling missteps (i.e. it’sits pinkypinkish), existence of plot-holes, and your tendency to “tell not show” really could be tweaked. If your writing abilities have grown since you lasted updated this fic; 1years ago, you should be able to finish/revamp The Cybertronian Bug with ease.
Please view this as an offer of constructive criticism and not a useless flame.
| Sena-kun chapter 4 . 7/30/2009
| dragonwitch250 chapter 4 . 7/10/2009
Your right it isn't. I want to know if Optimus will lose his memory? I hope you keep this up!
| mandy chapter 4 . 5/12/2008
please update soon. keep up the good work
| tomorrow4eva chapter 4 . 3/23/2008
Hehe, great chapter. Love Bluestreak's suit. Also, I think it's nifty that in the last fight, most of the ones with special abilities can't use them. Looking forward to seeing how it finishes!
| ArmoredSoul chapter 4 . 3/3/2008
Hang on OP...
| ArmoredSoul chapter 3 . 3/3/2008
| ArmoredSoul chapter 2 . 3/3/2008
*still trying to make OP feel better*
Here, try some tea.
*hands large mug of steaming liquid*
Well, technically it's hot motor oil, but it's the closest thing I could get to Transformer tea.
I always drink tea when I'm sick, especially if I have a sore throat.
Makes me feel better, so I don't see why it shouldn't help you.
| ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
I wish I'd found this fic when -I- was sick.
Would've made me feel better knowing that I wasn't the only one feeling icky!
But, I drew a piccy, so I helped myself!
OPTIMUS WITH A COLD!
| SaradocCraver101 chapter 4 . 1/30/2008
I love it and great job. Please update as soon as you can.
| SaradocCraver101 chapter 3 . 1/30/2008
I like it.