Reviews for Break Away
francis17pr chapter 12 . 2/17/2014
i loved this fic from the start... Everything was amazing . You did a fabulous job.
Psycho Tangerine chapter 12 . 2/20/2013
The grammar, spelling, and use of details is excellent. I wanted to smack both Kim and Tommy for being ridiculous and refusing to realize they love each other.
chloecee chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Tommy's letter to Kim was soo sweet and cute. That's enough to keep me reading
SYuuri chapter 12 . 2/1/2010
I just re-read the whole story and I really loved it. I hope you consider writing more TK story in the future :)
Itachi's aprentice chapter 12 . 1/23/2010
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice chapter 11 . 1/23/2010
Great work. Tommy should have beaten the crap out of Duncan. Sorry it took me so long to finished reading your story, since I was with out internet for a while.
lorli810 chapter 12 . 1/15/2010
that was an amazing story! i never would have thought about that as a reason for the letter. major points for you!
HorseRidersHaveMoreFun chapter 12 . 1/14/2010
Nice. I liked the story. Not what happened to Kim, but the rest was pretty cool. I would have liked to have seen more closure for Kim than just the verdict. Sometimes that's only the start and seeing how things are going for her a few months after that would have been nice.
HorseRidersHaveMoreFun chapter 11 . 1/14/2010
Not bad. A few things though. You need to give credit in each and every chapter for the songs that you are using. Thus, you need to give the title and the singer/songwriter/ artist responsible for it even if it's just in an author's note. Not everyone is familiar with the artist you keep naming, so this lets people know who it is and what the song title is.

Also, if Kim was in a medically induced coma, the breathing tube wouldn't be in her nose. She'd be intubated through the mouth, or in the case of a trachea obstruction, she'd have a hole in her throat and the intubation tube passed through that. Either way, she'd be on a ventilator and in ICU, not a normal room. It's a small thing, but having it happen to a few family members now and knowing that the info is available if you look it up on the internet, that kind of stuff makes me cringe. And if the doctor was treating Kim, he'd be sending a nurse out to give them information, not the doctor himself coming out to do it.
ufc91 chapter 11 . 7/17/2009
I'm glad that Kim is safe now. I still want Duncan and Kim's mom to pay for their crimes.
jps1926 chapter 11 . 1/7/2009
Thank you so much for continuing this story. It's funny because I just reread this story a couple of days ago. It's a shame that Kim had to go through all of that, even after everything else she's been through. Tommy's sure going to feel guilty for not being there sooner. I wonder what Kim's mom is going to think once she finds out what happened, if she finds out what happened. She is partially to blame for this. I hate to see this one end, but it was great while it lasted.
rose19586 chapter 11 . 1/7/2009
Thanks for posting this chapter! Please update soon the rest! )
TerraHart93 chapter 9 . 12/19/2008
great story...update real soon please
Itachi's aprentice chapter 10 . 12/2/2008
Great work. Please, PLEASE update soon, am on my hand and knee begging you.
Itachi's aprentice chapter 9 . 12/2/2008
Great work.
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