|Reviews for Exceeds Expectations|
| sLOVEnia27 chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
What a succulent little morsel. Hehehe. But very nicely written. :)
| Sarah-Lee Clare chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
well it says at the top that you were nervous. All i have to say is, i needn't be nervous - twas very *HoT*
| 404 Account Removed chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
This was AMAZING!
Don't know you, but, I love you!
This was awesome! Just fabulous! *claps*
Can't wait for maore!
| Rainaangel chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
I really liked that - very well written - great work! Would love to see it as part of a longer story. :)
| Aurette chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
Rape? If it was rape she wouldn't be biting his shoulder to stay quiet, would she? HELLO! I think it was very good. Lots of tension, always a good thing, and well executed. Don't be bashful in the future, write with confidence.
| ouiplanete chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
wow! that was short but very very good. it was to the point yet hot! :-D liked it VERY much!
| Alas Vomit chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
I loved it. It was just as I thought. Expand! ]
| justlikeyouimagined chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
Love scene? This was rape.
Not that it's bad to write rape. Just don't call a love scene rape.