Reviews for Gonna Make You Sweat
fangirlhaven chapter 4 . 4/6/2014
-stares at the computer screen in shock- huuuuuuuuh? -o-
fangirlhaven chapter 3 . 4/6/2014
okaaaay...
fangirlhaven chapter 2 . 4/6/2014
HAHAHA! XD hilarious
fangirlhaven chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
What in POOTIE TANG was that?! 0.o
Astrophel Thracius chapter 4 . 6/29/2013
I find it a bit different...that some the "I do not"s and whatnot aren't turned to "I don't". But I loved the story .
ruhana.sasunaru chapter 4 . 5/25/2013
can you make a sequel of this... please or prequel when they first met... :)
xxxwallflowerxxx chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
love it love it so sosos cute
DEATHinPINK94 chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
I'm not gonna lie... I couldn't get past the first chapter.

I absolutely hate when authors write their stories like an English report. So many good stories just irritate me from the start because the author refuses to use contractions! It's plain and simple, the regular human being does not talk the way that you write. In the story you're trying to get us involved in the lives of these people but it's incredibly hard when the diaglog sounds like something a robot would say. I just can't into the story because when you read it either in your head or out loud, it's really choppy. I doesn't flow like reading a regular conversation would. That's just my opinion.
Crazy PurpleSage chapter 4 . 5/5/2010
Oh yeah, happy ending for the porn stars. XD

No, I actually enjoyed that. I liked the Boy Wonder and Captain Marvel references too. Very funny.
Like I said, I'm reading your stories and enjoying them. Thanks!
xxRainbow-muffinsxx chapter 4 . 11/30/2009
aw! i totally loved this story! i loved the way it was written, too!
rain-of-the-soul chapter 4 . 9/6/2009
very good ending. a but rushed it seemes and a little ill thought out but still very good. i love this idea and cant waat to read more ofyour work. the only thing i dont like about your style that you could work on is the dialog parts. only a littlething. but sides that... brillant. very good.

~soulless~
rain-of-the-soul chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
wow... this a very original adn very good plot line so far. no wonder you have almost 100 reviews on it. i will definitely be checking out your other stories. very good so far. i commend you so far. hope the ending is as good as the beginning, if not better.
muumuu122 chapter 2 . 7/3/2009
Hot 3
Cedevita chapter 4 . 4/26/2009
You were in Croatia? Nice~

Umm.. I can only say that I don't know what to say. I don't know the words to describe it. Really XD It's too great to be described with some words.

P.S. I read some other stories of yours. Do you want me to review all of them?
MoshiMoshiQueen chapter 4 . 3/10/2009
Great story.
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