Reviews for Foreign Torment
chanalizah chapter 2 . 4/30/2009
I like where this is going. I really think you've struck gold with the topic. I'd love to see how you'll expand it :)
Nightmare Anatomy chapter 2 . 1/18/2008
Thanks for my/speaker of the dragon's charrie.

I love Liz...;)

Oh, and if you want to know more about her (because, of course, I know SO MUCH about her) she also likes Slipknot, DragonForce, Aiden, MCR, HIM...


MookyLife chapter 2 . 1/17/2008
update soon, please!
Maddeningly Mad chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
pretty good so far, but i think the people "almost throwing up b/c they were laughing too hard" is a bit drastic...


and you're not a crappy writer. You just need to work and practice, practice, PRACTICE!
Plumcherries2 chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
BITING YOUR HEAD OFF! is a bit drastic don't u think? it'd b much easier to send ol' voldie pants after u