Reviews for Archangel High
Miyu Nanami chapter 24 . 6/15/2011

You should continue writing it :))))))

YESSSSS : Athrun and Cagalli are together 3

Athrun is so cute when he pouts :DDDDD

Cliffhanger ! .

Pls update I really really love your story !
Asucaga chapter 24 . 8/31/2010
Can't wait to see the twins' reaction to the news. Hehehe. BTW love the storie.
The Blue Mask-cara chapter 24 . 8/22/2010
Please continue! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please!
AyameRose chapter 24 . 7/26/2010
YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON!... i realy like the story so far! and totaly want another update... (in a slightly evil voice) if you dont update soon... im not sure what could happen since i can easily find out where you live... haha JKJKJK... but seriously update soon!
Stories Of An Ordinary Girl chapter 24 . 7/24/2010
O.o oooooohhhhh
shiloah18 chapter 24 . 2/22/2010
ah, MiLLy definiteLy has some mother instinct when it comes to Dearka.. lol

someone neEds to put a LiL' restriction when it comes to kissing.. *eyes AsuCaga* XD

"I'm sure you have better things that to heLp me out." how about adding "to do" betwEen "things" and "that" and changing "that" to "than"?

"Athrun questioned?" shouLdn't that be a period.?

"The picture was of a woman hoLding on two babies." how about omitting the "on"?

"..coming from KIra's mother." I suppose the "I" shouLd be smaLLer?

no surprise for Gundam SEED readers.. about the KiraCaga twin thingy.. lol XD

nyWeiZ, sorry for the Late review.. it's stiLL up to you whether or not you'LL change the stuFf I pointed out.. :D suteki chap! pLease continue writing! :) jaa ne!
dEaYrEkSness chapter 24 . 5/20/2009
hey! Well yea ur back! Loll great chapter! Well can't wait for next chapter! Keep writing :)
wallywest chapter 9 . 5/17/2009

wallywest chapter 8 . 5/17/2009
Why are Britney Spears and Twilight in this story? I just find it kind of odd...

""1326 Maple lane road," said Cagalli."

Maple Lane Road should either be Maple Lane or Maple Road, because Lane and Road both stand for the street. The Maple part doesn't change because it's the Street's description. If it's supposed to be sounded together, it should probably be Maplelane Road or something.
wallywest chapter 7 . 5/17/2009
... way too soon.

I bet you can tell by now that I don't believe in first sight though.
wallywest chapter 6 . 5/17/2009
Athuran tripped Cagalli before. Why would he be nice to her now? Why would Cagalli like him?
wallywest chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
"There was a baloney that overlooked the garden. Cagalli had her own bathroom and a walk-in closet. There was a couch in the counter of the room that allowed her to watch TV and see outside the baloney."

Baloney. I can just picture a mansion with pieces of meat sticking out all over it. I'm going to assume you meant Balcony.

"“Yeah,” answered Ahmed. “Do you guys need a left home?”"

I'm just going to assume you meant Lift too.

And again, even in fairytales, this wouldn't happen in one day and any person who was the teeniest bit sane wouldn't tell someone they barely know their greatest secret...
wallywest chapter 3 . 5/17/2009
Even in fairytales abnormal things don't happen this fast...

The word I is used too much. Sounds kind of funny...
wallywest chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
That would be a weird start to the first day of school.

This chapter was a bit choppy too...


"he was running toward the boy with a baseball ball (lol)."

is it supposed to be baseball bat?
Katosuki chapter 24 . 5/13/2009
Nice fic hope you'll continue. I myself is writing a highschool fic.
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