Reviews for The Only Alliance
Aquarius Galuxy chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
This is the nth time I'm reading this... love it so much. The writing style is so very poignant, and it particularly affected me tonight, left me tearful somehow. Knowing both sides of the story, I love knowing how much hesitation is in Neji's actions, when he meets her again after they're in college and he's just watching her, but not daring to make the next step - it is very bittersweet. Their relationship isn't all that clear-cut in this piece, though I suppose that adds to the story, and the storytelling.
It felt a little rushed at the end, with the proposal, at least to me, and I wondered why Tenten preferred to have a longer engagement :o perhaps not everything needs to be explained though :)
Thank you again for writing and sharing!
Aquarius Galuxy chapter 2 . 3/6/2014
Beautifully written, I didn't think I could enjoy a high school AU so much! Love how it appeared as if Hinata collected the drawings from the train, but in actual fact, it was Neji who did p Also loved the tension and the interactions between all the characters.. Thank you for writing and sharing!
rasp8erry chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
precious. they broke my heart and
mended it back together.
pusa.is.me chapter 3 . 4/24/2013
I don't usually like AUs, but this one is just lovely. I like your descriptions, your writing style, and the emotions mixed in the plot. Thank you for writing this, never mind that it's been years and I only got to see this now. Really, thank you :)
emachookie chapter 3 . 1/30/2013
This is an interesting way to write. I like it. :) Honestly the whole "king" thing was my favorite. I kinda understood Neji's feelings there.
AliceOtaku chapter 3 . 10/15/2012
That was so perfect. Gotta admit, you had some heart-wrenching moments in there that made me want to cry. Well done!
xxxFlamingWingsxxx chapter 3 . 9/23/2012
Oh ehm! This is so cute! :)
Midnight Insomniac chapter 3 . 8/14/2012
AWW! So beautiful in every way. :D

Keep writing!

M.I.
HoneyHyuuga chapter 3 . 8/12/2012
You have a unique way of writing :) I like that. It was pretty cute and sincere, hope to read more of your stories, if you keep writing
coveted ardent chapter 3 . 4/15/2012
I enjoyed reading this. I like how you would put their memories in section.
Sweet Air chapter 3 . 1/28/2012
really good story :) i like your style of writing.
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 3 . 8/27/2010
pretty good story,i thought it was romantic and full of emotion
Kyanie chapter 3 . 8/15/2010
A fitting final chapter that seems to be in the form of drabbles. I find it witty :)
Kyanie chapter 2 . 8/14/2010
I love this chapter! The fluffiness is just right for my liking. Thanks for a nice read :)
Kyanie chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Very interesting story! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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