Reviews for The Only Alliance
Aquarius Galuxy chapter 2 . 3/6
Beautifully written, I didn't think I could enjoy a high school AU so much! Love how it appeared as if Hinata collected the drawings from the train, but in actual fact, it was Neji who did p Also loved the tension and the interactions between all the characters.. Thank you for writing and sharing!
classically chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
precious. they broke my heart and
mended it back together. chapter 3 . 4/24/2013
I don't usually like AUs, but this one is just lovely. I like your descriptions, your writing style, and the emotions mixed in the plot. Thank you for writing this, never mind that it's been years and I only got to see this now. Really, thank you :)
emachookie chapter 3 . 1/30/2013
This is an interesting way to write. I like it. :) Honestly the whole "king" thing was my favorite. I kinda understood Neji's feelings there.
AliceOtaku chapter 3 . 10/15/2012
That was so perfect. Gotta admit, you had some heart-wrenching moments in there that made me want to cry. Well done!
xxxFlamingWingsxxx chapter 3 . 9/23/2012
Oh ehm! This is so cute! :)
Midnight Insomniac chapter 3 . 8/14/2012
AWW! So beautiful in every way. :D

Keep writing!

HoneyHyuuga chapter 3 . 8/12/2012
You have a unique way of writing :) I like that. It was pretty cute and sincere, hope to read more of your stories, if you keep writing
coveted ardent chapter 3 . 4/15/2012
I enjoyed reading this. I like how you would put their memories in section.
Sweet Air chapter 3 . 1/28/2012
really good story :) i like your style of writing.
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 3 . 8/27/2010
pretty good story,i thought it was romantic and full of emotion
Kyanie chapter 3 . 8/15/2010
A fitting final chapter that seems to be in the form of drabbles. I find it witty :)
Kyanie chapter 2 . 8/14/2010
I love this chapter! The fluffiness is just right for my liking. Thanks for a nice read :)
Kyanie chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Very interesting story! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
dreaming.sapphire chapter 3 . 3/27/2010
Gah! I think I finally get this story! After reading it tens of hundreds of times! XD I love how you left out dialogue in the first two chapters and allowed for the actions you described to speak. It was done perfectly! I felt as though you pulled off the whole, "show, don't tell" thing my creative writing teacher always tells my class. I never really understood Neji and Tenten's relationship in this story, but I think it was that Tenten admired Neji in the beginning and eventually fell for him, but she was unsure. The whole "I'll never let you go" thing probably scared her and that's why she started pulling back and hesitating in the relationship, but eventually she realizes that she only wants Neji. Did I get it? Er... Sorry for the long review, I've just been trying to figure this out for a while. XD I love this!
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