|Reviews for Knight Errand|
| TammyHybrid21 chapter 20 . 3/1
This was definitely worth the wait, I mean I didn't really have that much time to enjoy reading it at first and might have had to skim it the first time, but now that I've re-read it properly I'm able to begin my review and state what I enjoyed about the chapter.
And Rience is still making me hate him, can't he tell that those two were just doing the best they could. I still don't like him... nice going Raventail shutting him up like that, also reading the stars, do they mean the movements and predicting the future using that?
And we meet Stormblaze's parents, I must say that they seem like kind people, and some that I could find myself been comfortable and at ease around. Also I don't know why but the part when Charis embraced Antoine I found it a bit funny, it might have just been me but the idea of Antoine been treated like a little kid like that just entertained me...
A safe place, yeah, Antoine you should definitely find a safe place where you can go to think and meditate on things. Heaven knows that having one helps me on occasion.
The idea of them both been swarmed by a bunch of excited children also entertains me, I mean come on that just sounds entertaining to think of... but honestly I'm glad that the kids are still curious enough to do that.
All in all I enjoyed this chapter, it was a nice break for the boys, but I do have the feeling that things aren't going to be as restful or easy for them soon enough... or maybe it's just me, at least things are looking up and they got to have a break :) Anyway that's it for this review then, and good luck with the next chapter Lucky.
| cakelesspixels chapter 19 . 11/13/2013
For some reason I haven't been getting the updates on this! I've also been taking forever to read it. I'm really sorry about that.
I know I said it before but I really love Stormblaze and Antoine. This fic has really made me appreciate Antoine way more than I ever did before. I can't wait for the next chapter and to see how everything with Naugus plays out. Honestly, all of this reads very much like something you could see happening on SatAM. If the show were ever revived and I were in charge, I would definitely have to get you a seat in the writers room. Sometimes fics read very clearly like fanfic even if it's good, but I could believe this being an actual episode. Well, it'd probably have to be a special or several parter. Still I could see it being official regardless of how it's distributed.
Actually, I like the idea of the Deep Power Stones giving different powers to every wielder. It makes things more interesting and it makes you guess what'll happen instead of being predictable. It also keeps characters from being able to predict everything way too easily, you know what I mean?
Confession: I kinda wanted them to take Rience down. Or, at least, for Antoine to poke him in the butt with his sabre.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/26/2013
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| TammyHybrid21 chapter 19 . 9/20/2013
How did I miss the update? Anyway this is still as amazing as the previous chapters and I must say that I found that battle sequence at the start quite thrilling to read. I also loved the fact that the unicorn construct was on all fours and that you referenced the fact that Mobians descended from Earth animals... LOL
I liked that little sequence where they named Antoine's sabre, it was neat. I've always wondered why in fiction blades and favoured weapons of certain characters had names... is this a real life thing?
as various small gifts ranging from handmade blankets to assorted trinkets, some of which were quite valuable, such as a ./ Is it just me or is there something missing from this sentence... sorry if it is just me...
I already hate Rience and Co, they're nothing more than overgrown bullies from what I've seen so far. I can't wait for the next chapter though and why do I get the feeling that Naugus' revenge will be quite problematic once it's enacted...
| Sonar chapter 19 . 9/19/2013
| TammyHybrid21 chapter 18 . 6/28/2013
Eep... if I was reading this with no foreknowledge of what you have planned (or no feeling that everything would be fine) then that last sentence would just freak me out, as in really freak me out. Honestly it still does, it's extremely foreboding to be completely honest.
Honestly I'm liking the whole Anti-Climatical part with the stones, it's better than what some do by using the whole bright flash of light thing, and a lot more subtle about the stones activating... although it kind of fits better with your story and I really am sorry I couldn't help you with finding out whether they do have any special affects when activating.
That part with the panther (I think that it was a panther sure sounds like one) Black Secret, and the taunt about simply taking Antoine's life-force now that spooked me. If they could do something like that, eep. Anyway this chapter was amazing overall, I loved it.
| cakelesspixels chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
I've been taking forever in reading! I'm sorry! I'm liking the bond between these two. :)
It's also nice to see you didn't forget about Antoine's flaws. ;) I knew you wouldn't, but it's still refreshing to see a story that doesn't demonize a character or erase his flaws. It's also good to see him learning from them already. Stormblaze makes a good buddy for him.
| cakelesspixels chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
I just started reading and it's off to a really good start! :) It's nice to see Antoine getting some love lol. I'm looking forward to seeing how this progresses. Keep up the good work!
| TammyHybrid21 chapter 17 . 3/20/2013
Antoine! Oh no, oh no, this looks bad. Also I knew that someone was going to yank on the chain eventually.
Ha Antoine's rematch with the spider was every bit as exhilarating as I expected it to be. That was awesome and he also managed to hold his own, at least until that cat showed up and took away his edge.
Oh, I hope that they can manage to get out of this situation it looks quite dangerous, also they shouldn't have written Antoine off quite so fast should've they.
Also sorry for taking so long, I had a few things going on...
| TammyHybrid21 chapter 16 . 2/3/2013
First things first, I am terribly sorry for going and disappearing off the face of the Earth and taking so long to review.
Anyway... on to the actual review! This chapter was actually quite intimidating (Spelling?) to me, the general tone that is.
Several times I had to stop and have a break before continuing on with reading, because I kept getting the feeling that something bad was going to happen. Of course in the end nothing did but man you and that evil cliff-hanger.
I liked the lead-in to the chapter with Stormblaze's fear in full force and Antoine doing a little reminiscing(?) about the past.
I laughed when they both tried the food that turned out to be far too spicy for them... that would have been me as well.
Luis was an interesting character himself, I do feel sorry for him about his niece been taken. The bit where Antoine tried to help him out was a nice touch as well.
Get to writing the next chapter quickly! I want to know what they hear?
| Save Fearow chapter 15 . 12/29/2012
I think this a wonderful story so far and commend you on writing something so epic. I don't think Stormblaze will be eating anyone, despite his misgivings about air travel. Ha! And I thought you did a very good portraying little Antoine, from all I've seen he was never a really snooty child, maybe a bit timid now and then, but generally seemed to enjoy running and playing with the other children. I don't think he really adopted that stand-offish attitude until after Robotnik/Eggman took over. (And I think part of that had to do with him being older than the others, he was old enough to be frightened by the changes, cognizant of his former lifestyle, and perhaps most importantly old enough to feel as though he should've made more of a difference)
| TammyHybrid21 chapter 15 . 11/9/2012
Nobody would logically be like Draco Malfoy, good example BTW.
Uh so Stormblaze is scared of flying, no shame in that. I'm scared of heights and have problems with vertigo myself.
Reading about the Sword of Light I thought of the movie/show/book "Sword in the Stone" it was just simmilar.
Also I liked the flashback/dream sequence.
| TammyHybrid21 chapter 14 . 9/3/2012
Yeah this was an amazing chapter, caught me a bit off guard at first... In English I was surprised at first then calmly accepted it.
OMG Stormblaze got shot, now that would have been shocking indeed, also what a neat way to get Fiona caught!
Looks like Antoine and Barkerville have warmed up to each other. I also really enjoyed the line where Stormblaze was talking about the job of being a servant and not wishing it upon anyone except his worst enemies was funny.
You mentioned Fang, don't go thinking that I didn't pick that up... also sorry for not reviewing straight away life happens you know, especially school.
| TammyHybrid21 chapter 13 . 8/20/2012
Ahh now that would have been quite an interesting sight to witness if we were able to. Yes that was heavy on the action even if it was only fighting a mundo freaky robot, I've got to stop thinking/speaking like Sonic when I get really excited. Hmm I wonder what's going to happen next especially since the enemy is still observant.
Antoine still has a lot to learn apparently and also is starting to lose a bit of his control. I hope that Stormblaze can help him understand just how important it is to retain control over himself. That voice is starting to annoy me... I wonder if Antoine finds it annoying at all?
Oh man electricity and there is the background on the gloves, I haven't been electrocuted myself but I have seen one of my friends touch a live electric fence wire by accident one. Not fun, I'm glad Stormblaze was able to recover quick enough, though not quick enough for Antoine I'd think.
Just a heads up (mentioned on my forum as well) but in about two weeks time I'm planning on changing my pen-name to TammyHybrid21. Thankyou.
| TammyHybrid21 chapter 12 . 6/24/2012
I had a feeling that Fiona was up to no good. Now Antoine's in trouble and Stormblaze doesn't even know about it.
I liked the little guitar lesson at the start shows a little bit more about Trip and a little bit about Antoine himself.
I must say the bit where Antoine lunged at the bad guys because they were laughing at him caught me way off guard.
I think the inner voice that Ant keeps hearing is actually his new found powers trying to control him after all didn't the Thunderbird issue a warning about that.