Reviews for Hermione Granger And The Point Of No Return
Guest chapter 31 . 3/2
That was a really good story! Thank you!
tina1988 chapter 31 . 1/20
Inspiring story. But could use a few more details, including the mind of Hermione and the mind of Severus. The story could be even written in first person sense. But in general, as said it is inspiring.
BipolarDragon chapter 8 . 12/29/2014
*Regulus, not Regulas (it's not like Legolas :P )
N longbottom chapter 9 . 11/24/2014
if I did not know any better i'd think you were Rita skeeter(aka-jkr?)haha
Stop chapter 4 . 10/21/2014
Asking for reviews PLEASE
Mary chapter 6 . 9/26/2014
The story is quite great, but well.. technically there was a huge mistake.
Sectumsempra was made up by Snape.. Noone knew about it.. He wrote it in his Advanced Potions book in sixth year...
I know it's just a story, but it bothered me. Otherwise the story is great.
Dimplz chapter 31 . 7/1/2014
If everything was up-to-date on your profile according to the profile's last update date, you were around 14 when you finished this story. If that is true, I thought you did a great job as a 14 year old writing a 91k word fictional piece. You do have a talent for writing and it would be interesting to see how your writing style matures as you mature and acquire some life experience.

That said, this story has great potential. The plot was interesting but the story was plagued by numerous typos and grammatical errors. It's a good idea to proofread your chapters before publishing, but getting a beta to look things over is best. Thanks for writing.
calli chapter 2 . 5/9/2014
Amazing!love it!
CheriFlawFinder chapter 17 . 5/4/2014
Why did Daniel have to die? First love is painful, but if she was his first love, he wouldn't react that way to Mione and Sev talking together at Hogsmeade... Cherrie the Flaw Finder
marisamarinee chapter 14 . 11/8/2013
marisamarinee chapter 7 . 11/8/2013
Aww but we like Snape
marisamarinee chapter 6 . 11/8/2013
Wait, I thought Snape was the same year as her?
marisamarinee chapter 4 . 11/8/2013
More Snape and Hermoine action please! I haven't read a SSHG fic in a long while
marisamarinee chapter 3 . 11/8/2013
Awww Snape
marisamarinee chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
:) awesome can't wait to read more
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