Reviews for Lucky
smileyface chapter 5 . 1/24/2012
I really enjoyed reading this story - great amount of hurt and comfort. The insight into each character's head was excellent. Well done.
Alerix Slynn chapter 5 . 10/4/2010
Awesome story! I loved the description and the relationship between all the characeters.

I also loved the way you described him feeling as he passed out. So accurate!

The static and the breathlessness, the only other thing I could suggest to complete the faint- manly passing out is the numb-sour taste that rolls over your tongue when you wake up.


Really great work, sorry I didnt reveiw each chapter in turn but I wanted to keep reading!
hajimebassaidai chapter 5 . 4/13/2010
A terrific read ranging from the horrifying to the funny successfully. I really enjoyed it!
Kaizoku-Taii chapter 5 . 12/10/2009
Aww, so amazing! Especially AMAZING seeing the first two chapters from Rodneys POV! it was odd, but breathtakingly written. Especially when he died, he actually /died/, and yet you seemlessly wrote the passage from /his/ POV! *collapses on floor worshipping you* amazing...

juliet164 chapter 5 . 12/7/2009
Great story, luv Rodney, always in trouble and still manages to come out smiling. Thak you:)
iamkagomeiloveinuyasha chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
aww poor Rodney

is 'at blood?

no its koolaid


j/k love him
HlysComment chapter 5 . 9/29/2008

I loved it even though it brought back some uncomfortable hospital memories. Sigh. I definitely get the impression you've been on the receiving end of medical treatment.

I certainly remember the long, long, long walks to the bathroom. :)
LinziDay chapter 5 . 9/21/2008
Fantastic! Wonderful! Awesome! Lots of other adjectives! :)

Great Rodney whump. Love the friendship stuff. Really, really great job.
Delka chapter 5 . 9/18/2008
Worth the wait. :) Thank you. Wish there was more out there like this one.
Silverthreads chapter 5 . 9/16/2008
I enjoyed reading this. :)
Dreamy-Orion chapter 5 . 9/16/2008
Thank you for finishing this one. I will be looking forward to new Rodney whumping fics :-)
Terri chapter 5 . 9/16/2008
Great story. Thank you so much for a good Rodney whumping story.

Terri certified Rodney Whumpaholic
Kreek chapter 5 . 9/16/2008
Wow, great story with lots of emotional impact. I loved Ronon's remark: It would have been better just to visit. LOL. McKay's POV also works very well and everyone is very in character. Thanks for the good read!
angw chapter 5 . 9/15/2008
Sheppard was there to lend a helping hand and Rodney's on the mend :)
SpaceMonkeyGal chapter 5 . 9/15/2008
I'm so glad you finished this one. Loved it!
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