|Reviews for painful love|
| LifeinClover chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
| Kai's kitty chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
It was a nice job and idea but you seriously need to work more on your grammer and writing style.I know that I am criticising but that's what every writer needs to idea of the one-shot was good and it's a shame to be wasted because of those things.
Any way enough of my critic job!.~ I miss you I am so damn busy these ya!
| Michael Jackson chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
It was fairly good, but you have to work on your grammar and format. It was rather hard to understand whereas it would be helpful if you didn't use the 'chat speak' version of words. Thanks for reading this.
| Ashley Sensie chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
*gives you naruto plushie's and hugs*You poor thing I know how it is I have the same problem with my family oh wells anyway awsome fic me likey