morbid ninja chapter 6 . 4/11/2008

the ending was intense

and the story itself was awesome

please make another series
Asianman2 chapter 5 . 3/7/2008
Heh now thats a good chapter :)

Seeing him using psychic powers really suprised me. I really enjoyed your use of his past about him wasn't psychic enough to control an army hance him being discarded. It seems his powers finnaly came to...and just in time to!

Good job and as always, update as soon as you're ready!
morbid ninja chapter 4 . 2/21/2008
freaking awesome chapter

it gets better as it goes
Asianman2 chapter 4 . 2/21/2008
So far everything is going good up till now. For some reason things are getting a bit old. Its point man continuing to suffer but this chapter felt rushed. No offense.

Maybe it could be a good time to bring something out?

I really like your story and I have falth you came bring it back up.

Update when you're ready but please take your time.
Asianman2 chapter 3 . 2/18/2008
*shudders* Yeah you might want to up the rating if its possible.

Dang without his guns, he's not really special. Just a man who's about to go insane...if he hasn't already. This chapter was very well done in the fact that he couldn't do anything to save them. He could only watch...and basicly suffer.

Again hope you update soon but take your time if needed.

Asianman2 chapter 2 . 2/7/2008
Whoa...this is like an asian horror type!

Point Man must know by now that his own death won't come to him and that the only path...or choice he even has is what Alma gives him. Thats a sign of defiance, thats a sign that he's not broken...yet.

ANYWAYS, I'm really liking what you wrote for Judgement and what you have currently for Nightmare. Keep up the great work and please update as soon as you're ready!