Reviews for Moiety
Delicate Desires chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Cute! (: This was my first TemaSaku, and I really enjoyed reading it. (:
animeice335 chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
Ok, I have to admit. I thought this was gonna suck. But, this is one of the best storys I have ever read. I was surprised, yet delighted. Thank you for writing this. :D
Skylar Datenshi chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
You did a pretty good job. It was definitely interesting
Halan Lore chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
I thought you got Sakura pretty much down. And this was just Loved it! Last TemaSasku? Aww man... The puzzle piece was funny.
Scarecrow047 chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
So cute! I just recently got into this pairing...in my opinion way better than Sakura/Ino.

Very lovely oneshot!
sophia666 chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
Interesting. I felt it was well-written and you got the characters down well, though the TemaSaku was a bit... awkward.
deadunistudent chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
I really liked this story. You wrote it in a way that we could get an insight into their lives and we could relate to it. And you showed the hardships of love and not just the lovey-dovey stuff and I really thank you for writing it! I LOVED IT!

w00t! Be Happy!

ReNzY!
0xnaomix0 chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
well done. this was excellent. i like how you told this from sakura's POV. it made the story have more... feeling. great job really. it was a cute, sad, and kind of deep one-shot. i liked it a lot!

great job once again. this was wonderful!

-naomi
AGENT Kuma-chan chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
Aww...this is nice...(and a nice treat after in-class exams...)

...I like the little description of love (that must have taken a while to get perfectly).

As well, I also like the way you made everything not perfect (for that is life, and not everything is all rainbows and roses).

...and it is cute (I admit i sort of don't mind yuri and yaoi...they have such KAWAII drawings sometimes...

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and if I didn't like them I probably would be murdered by my friends).

...Though, Sakura was a little...off at times, but that's ok.

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sigh...now it's time to study for the out-of-class exams...
illusioned chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
I THINK

UM

I THINK THIS IS MY FAVORITE OF ANYTHING YOU'VE WRITTEN TO DATE

I AM NOT EVEN KIDDING RIGHT NOW

MY FAVORITE WRITING OF YOURS AND IT'S *YURI*

IT BOGGLES THE MIND
obligatoryUsername chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Zomg, it was so well written that I can't even say anything-...wait...I'm saying things right now, aren't I...

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... uh...-idea no jutsu-Okay, got it!

IT'S SO FRICKING AWESOME THAT IT'S TOO AWESOME FOR WORDS TO DESCRIBE IT'S AWESOME-NESS!x190.

...yayz XD
NarutoUzumakiLuver chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
hey, Mya here! Srry I havent left a review for you to read in a while. I've been busy with everything. But on to my review. This story was really good, a little unexpected but I liked it anyways. I just uploaded a new ff. Would you mind reading it and telling me what you think of it, plz. It's called, "Mya's Ordinary Day" It's the first of its kind that I've written.

~Mya~
RofS chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Wow, this was a little strange. I don't think you usually write shoujo ai, do you? Still, it was very good!
MissEars chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Oh Wow! That's really pretty. It almost makes me want that pairing to happen! 'Mazing! *Gives you a cookie*

Nasakii
Kismet's Kiss chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
I envy you.

I'm scared to write that threesome AxelxRoxasxNamine for Ren...beause of the yaoi that needs to be included. XD

you did this is amazingly well. that was not proper grammar, but I'm sick so. bah.
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