Reviews for Mistake?
Ariane chapter 14 . 7/31
Wow! I'm glad to see this has updated, I read this years ago and was checking up on it :) please continue !
LB Cat chapter 14 . 2/26
I like your story. I think your imagination is great. To me this story is funny. Just don't be cliche with Naruto and Sakura pair. I feel when a writer does that, it's just to shortcut and simplify the story. Anyway Thank You for writing this story and I hopefully it will be completed
Guest chapter 14 . 11/28/2016
This fic is great. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
AraelDranoth chapter 3 . 11/15/2016
Hmmm I like the premise but I don't think he would be so bad. After the war he calmed down significantly
sumiko808 chapter 14 . 7/27/2016
Awww it's sweet. I'm glad I came back to this fic. It's funny because I was going to ask if you were going to go back, redo and edit your earlier chapters. But then I saw your author's note. Keep up the good work! If you're serious about finishing this story, I'm serious about reading and reviewing.
FallenRaindrops chapter 14 . 4/23/2016
Haha I totally feel you on the cringing at past self thing. I def had to skim through the entire fic to remember what it was even about but now that I've caught up I'm actually excited for you to finish this! Haha I want Hiashi to buy a shit ton of baby clothes when they have tea. Now I'm gonna go see if I have any cringe worthy old reviews for this fic
DageRee chapter 14 . 4/14/2016
The story is lovely and it was nice reading it, but readers probably can't expect much after seeing such a difference between publish date and update date. What a shame. But I'm going to follow this story. Follow of hope!... Or something like this :P
Sadie321 chapter 14 . 3/28/2016
Te best chapter of the story
Sadie321 chapter 2 . 3/28/2016
Really like the story.i will continue reading.
crimsonrosehime chapter 14 . 3/17/2016
Love the story! Will you be having more chapters though ?
Guest chapter 14 . 3/1/2016
It's wonderful to see the difference in writing style after so many years. You've certainly grown as a writer. I do come back to your story every so often to reread so I was delightfully surprised to see that it was indeed updated and not abandoned.

I was confused at first though about what happened and about some other things. I was kind of hoping the Hinata finding out/knowing of the other women would be a bigger blow out than it was but I appreciate the subtle route as well. I appreciate that you even came back into the story at all.

I kind of wish it was a slower build up to Sasuke and Hinata falling for one another but I guess it can't be helped with the pregnancy and all helping to sway the emotions.

Thank you for writing. I would like to see more of the other characters involved in the story too in that's okay. Like in a baby shower perhaps? Or even day to day life would be nice if you can. Thank you!
Yuki no Ai chapter 14 . 3/1/2016
please continue! I really like the story
Guest chapter 14 . 3/1/2016
Naaawww! The baby died. :(
Just found this story.
I'm so happy to say thank you to you for making it and decided to continue it!
Thank youuu!
Please finish it!

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Linnorria chapter 14 . 2/29/2016
Wow, this was a surprise. A nice one even though the chapter was sad
PuppetPrince chapter 14 . 2/29/2016
Cute ;)
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