Reviews for Please Love Me
Guest chapter 11 . 4/21
Really well done story. I loved how adorable Harry was and enjoyed how you had him speak phoenically, it adds a kind of authenticity that other kinds of dialog lack. I also really liked that it was fully Sirius centric. I think too often fanfiction writers lump Sirius and Remus together and have them living together with no real clear reason why two adults are seemingly codependent. Remus was a good and supportive friend (like canon) but it was clear that Sirius was the real guardian. One thing I would have changed is that I thought Sirius settled in a little too naturally to some parenting techniques. I don't mean the big stuff like comforting Harry and being patient, I mean the smaller things like thinking to ask a three year if they washed their hands. It was nice to see how caring he was but Sirius is still a guy in his early twenties with limited experience with kids so a learning curve would be expected. Overall though great story, liked the flash backs and it ended on a strong note where you can see that Harry is happy and healthy even if he had a few bumps along the road
abigailsumpter7 chapter 11 . 2/9
And can you have harry get in trouble with Sirius please
abigailsumpter7 chapter 10 . 2/9
Do not skip around please go back to when harry was 3 because I want him to enjoy his childhood with Sirius because once its gone its gone and it not coming back.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2016
I think this is brilliant I try to find fanfics like a lot of the time because of the plot line well good luck
iloveclintbarton chapter 3 . 8/19/2016
its too cute
iloveclintbarton chapter 1 . 8/18/2016
same sirius is the best character ever
moey chapter 3 . 7/31/2016
This is amazing 3 _ 3
Dumbledore chapter 1 . 7/31/2016
these are my fav stories
Protip chapter 2 . 7/18/2016
I just want to say that you don't have to write the accent or the exact way harry is speaking. It actually slows down the story and (at least for me) can actually pull the reader out of it. You just need to say
-he said with a scottish accent
-he said slurring his words in a way only a three year old can.

The reader will then read it as you indicated and their brain doesn't get slowed down by having its hand held through reading the words exactly like its suppose to sound word by word.
Alicia chapter 2 . 6/13/2016
You need to put more pants wetting and bed wetting in it
FuzzyElf24 chapter 8 . 5/14/2016
We all know the truth. The puns are very intended, aren't they?
pokefan366 chapter 11 . 4/21/2016
Are you going to continue this story? It's very good so far.
Guest chapter 11 . 2/29/2016
PLZ HURRY UP AND UPDATE PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ! I LOVE THIS FANFICT WISH I COULD MEET YOU PERSONALLY. YOU'RE AWESOME! I LOVE HARRY POTTER
Brianna G chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
That was heartbreaking happy/sad. I love it so far.
Guest chapter 11 . 2/16/2016
MOOOOOOOOORE MOOOOOOOOORE MOOOOOOOOOR ! PLS!?
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