Wonderful interpretation. I could so see this happening.

Great interpretation. Better than the original.

renee.. always watching.. just like i imagine... thank you for this

I liked it. Very well written thanks for writing. FelicityT

I loved this story!

this is really good, i like renee's pov a lot!

dobby

awesome fanfic as awesome, thanx for mentioning Alice *wink wink* sorry i always get excited. so yeah, great story.

Just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading this story. Definitely don't get many fics on this subject. Thanks for writing it. D

i loved it. i mean i did wonder what happened the first time they met. i think you did a really good job with renne's character.

Hey, i hope you keep writing this! It's really god so far, i've always wondered what had happened when Bella was uncouncious, but sadly i'm not a writer]

i loved that! it was exactly like i was reading the books! ...i don't want to sound awful but the 'something isn't right' doesn't exactly sound...right...oh, well. it really was a great story!

I really liked this, it was a nice little insight to the renee character, she definately was perceptive and this was a very good oneshot, perhaps you could do the meeting in eclipse too? that would be interesting...

good story :D melissaturkey

Nice fic! I enjoyed it. Very well written.

ooh, I love this. You really are an amazing writer and even without your copy of Eclipse you did better than most could. I loved it and I'm glad you write it. It definately acurately describes Edward's guilt and Renee's curiousity. It was very very good. Very much how I would picture if Stephenie Meyer wrote it herself. Adored it.

always.

brunette-in-black

wow that was SO good! You should write more stories!