that was really good!

Wow, that was good. I liked it. Nice job.

I loved this one-shot! ] Great job!

ah! an awesome one-shot, edwards slightly OOC and i've never though of this!

lol thats the exact line at the end (wowza i think) GO SUPER TWILIGHT FANATICS WHO'VE READ IT TO MANY TIMES TO JUST BE CALLED "FANS" AND NOT FANATICS! *high five*

I think you did a great job with Renee - capturing the way she sees past things directly into the truth.

Great job ] Love you writing!

I love it!

Very good.

THIS WAS GOOD I WISH YOU WOULD WRITE MORE THO.

Awesome! I love this point of view. It's cool to see!

-chris

Well, this was interesting. Definitely not cliche or overdone, and something that I always wanted to know, too. Wellwritten, and Renee was exactly like I imagined her to be. Yay for the 19-year-old writers of fanfiction!

Wow, very powerful story. I actually cried even though its not too sad of a story. You are very good at capturing peoples personalities. I cant but help think that you must be a deep person yourself... Anyway, keep writing, your good at it.

SXS

i loved it ...and you did percieve renee so well

Very nicely written. I think you really understand Renee's character and were able to write for her incredibly well. Some constructive criticism, if I might... the repetition of "my baby", "my daughter", etc. got a little bit annoying. For some reason that just stood out to me. Really nice job, though. I'm very impressed with how well you wrote a minor character's thoughts.

I didn't like

the way

renee acts to the

cullens...

but I still like it

whoa. like, absolute whoa.

im O.

i love it. can't wait for another story from you.