Reviews for Something Strange
paws93 chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
that was really good!
Sakiru Yume chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Wow, that was good. I liked it. Nice job.
gryffindorgal87 chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
I loved this one-shot! ] Great job!
Maxegirl1313 chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
ah! an awesome one-shot, edwards slightly OOC and i've never though of this!
Rosalind Mariero chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
lol thats the exact line at the end (wowza i think) GO SUPER TWILIGHT FANATICS WHO'VE READ IT TO MANY TIMES TO JUST BE CALLED "FANS" AND NOT FANATICS! *high five*
TwilightObsessedMell chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
I think you did a great job with Renee - capturing the way she sees past things directly into the truth.

Great job ] Love you writing!
lavenderxbella chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
I love it!

Very good.
OldRuins chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
Daedalos chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
Awesome! I love this point of view. It's cool to see!

Angeliss chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Well, this was interesting. Definitely not cliche or overdone, and something that I always wanted to know, too. Wellwritten, and Renee was exactly like I imagined her to be. Yay for the 19-year-old writers of fanfiction!
SummersXsolstice chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Wow, very powerful story. I actually cried even though its not too sad of a story. You are very good at capturing peoples personalities. I cant but help think that you must be a deep person yourself... Anyway, keep writing, your good at it.

vampirechick123 chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
i loved it ...and you did percieve renee so well
Barricade.Boys chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Very nicely written. I think you really understand Renee's character and were able to write for her incredibly well. Some constructive criticism, if I might... the repetition of "my baby", "my daughter", etc. got a little bit annoying. For some reason that just stood out to me. Really nice job, though. I'm very impressed with how well you wrote a minor character's thoughts.
ScarlettDelilah04 chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
I didn't like

the way

renee acts to the


but I still like it
DarklingShift chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
whoa. like, absolute whoa.

im O.

i love it. can't wait for another story from you.
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