|Reviews for Summer of '96|
| MartinDeShade chapter 1 . 9/3
I just don't buy anything that Tonks is saying. Ginny is muscle? Ron is strategy? Harry a great leader after the screw up that is the DoM? Then she points out what is wrong with Harry by pointing in a book. If he was a great leader why would he have multiple things wrong? The only thing he sort of gets right is his instinct when shit goes down, but that is more a learned instinct by experience.
| Saissa chapter 6 . 5/25
I too liked Madonna from her 1985 Like a Virgin Album until the 1999 Ray of Light album. I have not seen or heard any music of her since.
| thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 5/14
things are going a bit fast, but that might just be a matter of personal preference
| thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 5/14
ive never been a fan of ginny, but its good to se that you dont feel the nead to bash her to support the ship youve chosen
| thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 5/14
harry takes sirius's loss badly, but i imagine it would be 10 times harder on remus (with or without your AU change)
| thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 5/14
its good to see harry get called out on his angst, he wasnt perfect, but that doesnt diminish the sucesses he acheived too
| rpeh chapter 11 . 5/12
I thought this was a pretty good story. While I like all types of HP fanfiction, I have a particular fondness for stories that manage to do their own thing while fitting in with canon. Dumbledore's Army and the Year of Darkness was the first story I read and it does exactly that. This one obviously changes Harry's summer quite a bit, but it fits in with the school year so I'll let that pass.
I don't like the way you made Remus gay just to get him out of the way, but it's not a huge problem.
In general this is a good, focused story and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing.
| DementedMage chapter 11 . 9/2/2014
It was good reading this one. Thanks. I dont understand why you brought up wolf patronus thing, in canon Tonks' patronus changed from what I dont know to wolf 'coz she was in love with Remus. Whatever indication you meant to give in here I honestly didn't catch it.
| Daniel chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Was that a quote from the Art of War?
| Sammyboy94 chapter 11 . 4/8/2014
Good for the most part... I love the harry tonks pairing but i prefer the 'happily ever after' storys.
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/30/2014
fuck you u fucking cunt, why did you break them up for u arsehole
| moosejuice5 chapter 10 . 2/6/2014
nice story, sad ending though i guess it fits in with the plot, i'd of liked to see the epilogue go to after malfoy lets the death eaters in though
| Starless chapter 11 . 1/22/2014
"Here it is: a canonical Harry/Tonks story."
If someone didnt figure it out means that its a JKs crap. Loser Potter, slutty Tonks and the same good old unreal pairing. Sometimes i wonder if Miss R. caught a delirium in between third and forth books.
The fanf - the same lame angsty waste of time. Someone obliviate me from this... experience.
| moosejuice5 chapter 11 . 11/8/2013
nice, i'd of loved to see a part in the epilogue where Draco is proved a death eater
| MisterJoke chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Wait... So Tonks just carries the fucking Art of War on her pocket? What the hell?