Reviews for The Frail
bigicy chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
Good writing style.

I liked how you approached the topic.

It feels it needs a continuation :)
Grimjowx chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Ooooh, feeling the jameron!:D
justjoe chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Great job addressing the elephant in the room.
PSG1JOHN chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
very nice, about them Sarah had a little talk.
Dre4mwe4ver chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Great story! For some reason, I really like our writing style. I think it's just how you provide enough insight into the character's internal thoughts, without it seeming too forced, or like you're just telling us "he thought this and she thought that". Great job!
MarshallOC9 chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
i like this story i hope your not done with it
fairedust chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
I thought this was very good.
inkydoo chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
i like this story a lot.
lacking a better name chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
a bit different but good.
User25214 chapter 1 . 8/27/2008

what was the 'big 'click' ' in johns mind?
Alana84 chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
I like this a lot, is it an one-shot or a WIP?

If it is, please continue, I'd love to read more!
thegoldenfirefly chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
What's the big deal with Cameron being a girl? Heh it's the crime of the century! This was a good fic
iimagineyou chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
Interesting idea that Cameron would be "honoured" to have John see her as alive. I like how you wrote this.
star01 chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
good start
Cable Addict chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
This isn't finished is it?
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