J'ai bien aimé le rôle de Severus avec Harry. J'aime les histoire quand Severus n'agit pas comme un salaud envers Harry. Il est dommage que Sirius n'a pas réalisé qu'il ne pouvait pas prendre soin de Harry car il était lui-même handicapé. On peut voir que Harry a eu une vie heureuse avec Severus et c'est le plus important.

good story

Whoops, nvm

Nonononono how does min get to see harry without a checkup!?

i love this ending. its just so perfectly hopeful but realistic for the characters. i come back to it often

I enjoyed this story but it also made me sad

Thank you for rewriting and sharing this original, thoughtful and well written story!
I enjoyed it very much!

Thanks for posting. (I can't compare it with the original, which I didn't see.) Was glad for the de-emphasis on politics; I care by far the most about people, especially Snape. You ended this as well as realistically possible given HP's mistreatment.

You're a very versatile writer with something for every taste: kudos for that!

Thanks! for explicating what so few ficcers even realize, that Poppy of all Hogwarts humans had to know Snape best and like the Marotters (perfect sobriquet from Alethea27) least. She wouldn't either be all that fond of canon-Dumbles, the Potter bully-gang's abettor, excuser, and protector - and Snape's abuser and later ruthless slavemaster. Your Dumbles is a bit better, at least now - actually recognizes his mistakes with respect to HP. I hope Dumbles doesn't backslide, and also that he or Snape keeps a wand constantly trained on the mutt when the latter - ~many~ weeks from now! - gets admitted to HP's room.

Too bad Snape can't hope to get away with slipping a little something into one of the mutt's potions. It'd save HP, Snape, Poppy, and the world at large a great deal of grief.

Your writing is its usual quality. Don't know if I can take much more unrelieved nastiness, but that's not a criticism, just a fact. Thank you for your hard and effective work.

Very intense story, not typical but definitely engrossing. Great job.

Wow this was a great story! I wish I could have seen more of Harry interacting with these new group of his peers a bit and a bit more of him as an adult. But overall it was a terrific read and thank so much for creating it!

I really enjoyed reading this story. You wrote very realistic story.

I love this story. But I have a question. Did Dumbledore ever realize/know Voldemort was back and a part of Harry’s life?

“There was once a serial killer in the Muggle world who was thought to be a surgeon, or someone with medical knowledge, since he cut his victim’s throats and removed their organs. Remus to McGonagall.

I’m assuming you were referring to Jack the Ripper?

good story I have never read another one like it.