Reviews for Martyr
Marskatr chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
This hurt my soul far more than I expected it to. ._. It isn't even because Temari died, because she was so strong but it was just... Hidan.
Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Very nicely written.
Madame Red Wolf chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
wow that was amazing!
CutieSOS chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
this was good
movom chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
I've Read this fic long Time ago and I cant stop to do this again and again because I like it so much!

One of the best HidaTema Fangic I've Ever Read!
Miss T Hyuga chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Now that is something worth reading. If it were to continue, I would totally read it. I kind of want to know what Shikamaru would do if he found out lol.
1angel2heart chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Awesome story and excellent writing! I love how you made everything so detailed and within the characters' behavior - nothing was OOC. It was a bit depressing, but still very good! I enjoyed it _
TaintedMoonlight chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Wow. This is very very creepy, but astonishingly beautiful all the same.

One thing I noticed. You wrote: " Temari wishes that he had the energy to spit in his face."

I think you meant 'Temari wishes that "SHE" had the energy to spit in his face.'?

I really like it. It's strange and haunting and yet, incredibly alluring. The emotions you describe and the words you use are just perfect. The ending too is magnificent.

~Jenni~
Heart's Door chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
I will admit that it was well-written and perhaps creative. Unique? Definitely. Cliche? No way. And also, disturbing and twisted are two other adjectives that can describe it. Yes. Quite disturbing.
Coco-Minu chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Hidan is so disturbed. Temari is great. HidanTema is hot.

I like it.
lalalalollipop chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Nice! Very intense, it really made me think. Fluent and descriptive, overall, a great job!
Bleeding-lily chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
Wow, that was pretty intense. Great job!
ShadowSilk chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
Beautifully written and wonderful characterizations. I thought this flowed brilliantly-I love your writing style! ] Great job!
PullMeLikeI'mYourZiper chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
hum... interesting... a lot

good writing
Wendy chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Intriguing. Good fic.