Reviews for Camping Trip
Scarlet Apple chapter 8 . 3/1/2008

And I thought there was only one addition to the pile of poo you call "The New Gilmore."
Manni Renee chapter 8 . 1/30/2008
LET FREEDOM RING! LET THE WHITE DOVE SING! Love that song! Love the chapter. Back to Gilgamesh...yuck.
Manni Renee chapter 7 . 1/27/2008
talk about amazing! lol. any baby names i should concider? IM DESPERATE!
Manni Renee chapter 6 . 1/27/2008
I love being an awesome reviewer! lol. Great job!
Manni Renee chapter 5 . 1/26/2008
Good chapter! [[yawns and passes out from exhaustion]] lol. not really.
Manni Renee chapter 4 . 1/25/2008
Love this story! AMAZING!
Manni Renee chapter 3 . 1/21/2008
JESS IS HOT! Great Chapter!
Richi03 chapter 2 . 1/19/2008
I should probably have read your other story first, cause I'm going who's Daisy? right now. But regardless of that, this is really good so far. I'm on to the other one, right now lol.
Manni Renee chapter 2 . 1/17/2008
haha. braid hair. I like that. good chapter!
aimes113 chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
i liked how you developed the characters but the story should start with conflict to make the reader curious.

"I looked up, and saw lots and lots of trees," should be more descriptive like i looked up and saw the array of numerous trees.

to make it more jess-like, make his thoughts as sarcastic as his words.

and i like the flannel shirt store comment-i thought it was funny.
Manni Renee chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
[[sighs]] I love Jess. Good chapter.