Reviews for Finishing A Family
multyfangirl20 chapter 1 . 2/14/2017
Sorry , it's tooo gooy childish marshmallow. It's not bad just it's like one of those cartoons that are meant for the really little kids.
my bleeding tears of agony chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
kinda short but fluffy i highly doubt ot would happen lkike that but it was cute
justmeandmytech chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
Just a little too fast, if you right another story like this, try to make it longer...

Good Job! XD
angelbsb chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
loved it . i loved the name you gave there baby .
Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
good story
EJ Musso chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
Hey

that wasa great stort short and sweet

keep up the good wk

EJ Musso.
imaginedreams22 chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
AW-HOW SWEET!
bambichic chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
that was cute!
Gabby-Chwan chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
THAT WAS SO FREAKING CUTE!

THEY HAVE A FMAILY NOW!

faving
lyrical-harmonies chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
i'm sorry, but it's all a little too ooc for my taste
Lil Heaven1985 chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
Thankyou for the comments, this was a short little fanfic so I really didn't want it to be too long you know :)
mangafan chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
cute concept, but it felt a little rushed. If you filled out the story with a little more detail and other plot elements instead of declaring Sophie's pregnant, telling everyone else right away, and having the baby born, then the story might feel a bit more complete.

Keep up the good work! :)
sutekiz chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
simply lovely.