|Reviews for Finishing A Family|
| multyfangirl20 chapter 1 . 2/14/2017
Sorry , it's tooo gooy childish marshmallow. It's not bad just it's like one of those cartoons that are meant for the really little kids.
| my bleeding tears of agony chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
kinda short but fluffy i highly doubt ot would happen lkike that but it was cute
| justmeandmytech chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
Just a little too fast, if you right another story like this, try to make it longer...
Good Job! XD
| angelbsb chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
loved it . i loved the name you gave there baby .
| Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
| EJ Musso chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
that wasa great stort short and sweet
keep up the good wk
| imaginedreams22 chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
| bambichic chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
that was cute!
| Gabby-Chwan chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
THAT WAS SO FREAKING CUTE!
THEY HAVE A FMAILY NOW!
| lyrical-harmonies chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
i'm sorry, but it's all a little too ooc for my taste
| Lil Heaven1985 chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
Thankyou for the comments, this was a short little fanfic so I really didn't want it to be too long you know :)
| mangafan chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
cute concept, but it felt a little rushed. If you filled out the story with a little more detail and other plot elements instead of declaring Sophie's pregnant, telling everyone else right away, and having the baby born, then the story might feel a bit more complete.
Keep up the good work! :)
| sutekiz chapter 1 . 1/19/2008