|Reviews for Tear in Your Hand|
| 1711AdvenaAvis chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
Awesome job !
| ashley chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
you know, reading this and listening to you found me by the fray makes it all the better. :)
| SilverLining chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Okay. That was ... oomph ... very exciting. um, thanks.
| ab89us chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Booth is so sweet. This story is also sweet. Great job!
| JennCorinthos chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
Your stroies just keeps on getting better...
| Topsy chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
this is awesome. at first, i was like, damn... it's going to end soon, 'cause i could see my scroll bar wasn't going to go much farther. but i think you ended it really well. it doesn't always need to be about ALL of it. if that makes any sense. this was just... lovely. :) thanks for sharing it with us all.
| magialuna chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
That was so selfless and sweet.. the hotness is nice but it is just so selfless and a great oneshot. So very Booth to be selfless and be there however necessary for Bones. Thanks for sharing. -Clare
| MaxandFang4evr chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
| Hazmatt chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! So intense!
| ewriter chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Write more please and give me the satisfaction i need to see them happy and together
| Habita chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
I took this fic with me to read during the week. I knew I would like it, because, truth be told, I always love all you write :-) But what I didnt know was that I would love it that much.
Its incredible. It has it all. Its thrilling, its tender, its angsty, its moving, its sweet and its very, very hot. You did a gorgeous job with this story, it amazes me how many brilliant and beautiful ideas you have for these two. Im really glad you write them, and Im thankful for it, too. THANK YOU! Fanfics makes my days easier!
Well, what I loved the most about "Tear in your hand":
"The target smiles", "The target falls". I liked that he thinks of him as "the target". We know thats how he refers to his victims and I found very in character that you kept his terminology. It kind of makes the story more real.
"Because if he has to choose between his soul and her life, well, it's not even a choice" Very powerful quote! because we know how hard its for him to take a life, but we also know he wouldnt doubt a second if it was for her. "Its not even a choice". I loved, really LOVED it.
"As gently as he can, he rubs the circulation back into her limbs" I loved this scene. It was lovely that he cared about that thing when he could just untie her and hug her. And it felt like some kind of hidden comfort, like he was giving her time to cope a little, but at the same time searching for a connection, so to speak, by touching her. Ok, Im just rambling now, lol.
"The sharp tang of her fear pulls him forward" Totally loved it. He could literally feel her fear. I loved when he shushed her even when she havent said a thing. I loved his impulse to comfort her even if she didnt ask for anything. It was beautiful.
"Her patience is a warning sign" I loved how he can read her.
"...curling his hands into fists so he won't touch her". Loved this quote. Perfect description of frustration.
"He chose them because he knows they'll be soft against her skin" I HAVE to love your Booth :-)
"The tension in his shoulders eases a notch when she nods". Really loved how you described it.
I totally LOVED the next scene, I will say "the ointment scene" because of my lack of vocabulary, Im sorry. It left me breathless. It is very tense. I mean, they hardly said a few words but you did it great creating the atmosphere. I loved how she avoided talking about what happened, for me its like she knew she could breakdown at any moment.
I loved the way she finally asked for something. I loved that he just sat in bed with her even if he didnt quite understand what she wanted, but he stayed for her. Beautiful.
"Surprise makes his heart stutter" Love he way you described it :-)
"No one else says it like that, like it's a prayer and a command" And I loved how you described the effect that she has on him.
"He surrenders to whatever is happening between them" I totally ADORED all that happens next. Her hand on his face, he nuzzling her palm, asking her what she wants. Its all perfect and its so gorgeous the way you write it that I could quote every single line and it would be all "one of my favourites" :-)
"...and then runs his fingers over her eyebrows, cheeks, nose." LOVED how he enjoyed her. I dont know if he was teasing her or worshiping her, but it was perfect.
Loved the way he touched her, too. The way he started slowly but quickly realizing what she really wanted.
"...as he buries his face in her neck and inhales in her scent" Loved it. "She smells like his soap, only much better". I love it when you describe smells, Im not sure if I already told you this...
"He rubs his stubbled cheek against the silky skin on the inside of her thigh" *melts*
"She is as beautiful as he imagined she'd be" I loved that he thought that. Its lovely.
After she came, and when she started to cry, it was an incredible scene. It broke my heart when she tried to apologize: "You're still wearing all your clothes, Booth." I loved that this time was him the one quieted her, feeling free to comforting her now. "Shh. I'm here now." I loved that you used the same sentence he had told her in the first scene.
Awesome job. Really great, Lerdo :-)
Thanks A LOT for sharing!
| LocoGreggo chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
That was sweet, Poor B&B.
| Ponys chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
Now that is seriously romantic.. well, not the beginning of course.. but smiles! :)
| BB-Jate-MiSA chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
Oh my god, amazing! Loved it. Great job, you conveyed the emotions so well it was really heartwarming.
| mumrulz chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
Oh, Lerdo, Lerdo, Lerdo. I thought that you knew me by now. I HAVE to read your fics, therefore I HAVE to review.
I have a list of writers that I obsessively read, & you my girl are on that very short list. I am your personal stalker, I follow you everywhere, & I will always let you know what I think of them.
Your porn challenge failures are our successes.
Loved this, their silent communications show just how well they know each other, how finely attuned they are to each other.
**Another name added to his list, but it's all right. Has to be. Because if he has to choose between his soul and her life, well, it's not even a choice.
...omg...it just rips right through you. The emotion, the intensity, his dislike of having to kill again, but it's for HER & he would do it again & again & again if he had to. It wasn't a question of choice, but instinct, survival, not just for her but also for him. Coz, without her...
I love how Booth is so sensitive to all her needs - the old clothes, soft against her skin, applying the ointment, he stays & comforts her, will do anything for her.
**"Tell me what you want, Bones," he says. "Kiss me," she says, and he feels it everywhere—in his chest, in his cock, and sparking up his spine.
Brennan needs to feel comfort, she needs to feel safe, she needs to feel him.
**She tastes like...home.
...that really is the sweetest thing I have ever heard. :-)
I hope that you are going to continue this so that Brennan can at least return the favour. And then you will have to keep continuing so that they can eventually share it together, become one together. LOL. :-):-):-)