Reviews for Year of the Spark: January 16
KageOkami-Kogo chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
Aww cute! I loved it :D It was kinda short though... D:
eiohvbnfjkb932t42i chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
About that last line... all I can say is..

"Oh, John!"


Love this sort of stuff, perfectly written!

This CANNOT be the end of this one!

Even though it IS cute as it is, still... you should write more! (i'll see if you do, i kinda read this series a bit late LOL)
ancientesha chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
no,no,no! not the end [-x pleaase *begging*

i love this chapter:D .wink:: please write some more chapters for this story. it's great! besides .. they only reached the jumper:D *wink*


if you wrote a sequel to this, do let me know:D
Darkwing333 chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
oh man, i was waiting for him to comment on her shorts! Hee hee, great story!
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Great story! Cute!
Stargatecrazy chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
loved it loved it loved it!

/and slowly removed the brush from her mouth, glaring at it as if it was the one who had rung the chime/

That made me laugh so much!

And John flirting with Elizabeth at the end was perfect!

Space1Traveler chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
Nonono! This is not the end. There is more, I know it. Waiting patiently and thanks by the way. Could you tell I liked it?
zilco chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
more please more! this is so cute...
Bedazzle Me chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
That was so awesome! So cute.
Myriadragon chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
Who wears short shorts? Liz wears short shorts! Cute :)
SenseOfTime chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
Hehe! This was great; so cute and fluffy! Loved seeing John's protectivenss over her, and their banter was very amusing!
Charmed225 chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Nono do more more I love this! :) There is so much angst out there for these two that I love it when someone right a nice fluffy humorous piece :) and it was well written!
belanna30 chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
It was a cute idea. Do not worry!
aaanonnn chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Aww, I liked it! Good job considering how tired you must have been! :)
sparklyshimmer2010 chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
:D oh i love how you ended it! lovely! :)
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