|Reviews for Not a Prince|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/30
You made me die a little from the sadness... I'm not crying.
| Tiramisulover chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
I love this! It's terribly sad that Tsunade never accepted his love...
I'm sobbing like a child.
You captured the heartbreak perfectly: knowing your a toad who can never be a prince for the princess.
However, considering Tsunade's reaction to his death and the scene where she says "you won't have to act so tough anymore it you survive this mission", I believe she was ready to give him a chance...gah! That just makes it even sadder, to think that his princess could have given him a chance had he survived...
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I want pervy sage back T_T this made me cry. Really. It's just so wonderfully written, it makes me wish that Tsunade did hear what he was saying. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful :')
| Genny-Scorpio chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
OK, not many things make me cry. This didn't either. BUT tears were just resting on my eyelids at the "just a toad" part. Damn, write a book, you are fantastic! I'd sure as hell buy it!
| Chrysa Lite chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
"Dan was your prince and I was just… a toad. Not a prince, but a toad—just a measly toad." I almost broke down crying there. This fic was so IC and sad and beautiful and tearjerking...
*runs away sobbing*
| existence555 chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
This is really sweet.
Jiraiya is completely in character, I could really imagine him.
I also love how lighthearted it is, when it seems to be set in a dark situation. (I loved the bit about the porn and Dan)
Great job on this! It's very well written.
| Kishimoto's Publisher XD chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Ahh...it's so sad..! This make me hate you more Dan!
| RedBrunja chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Oh, *Jiraiya* You totally nailed his voice.
| Bunko08 chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Aw. Cute! Funny! and yet Sad! I loved it. 10/10
| Lady Dark Angel chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
aw poor jiraiya! I dunno why I like him, I just do. He reminds me of an uncle you just can't help but worry over. He does die! (haven't gotten that far yet in the manga) so sad! *cries*
This was nice in a bittersweet way two thumbs up!
| Rednee-san chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
This was a sweet story, a little sad but I still liked it.
| neverbetter21 chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
nice story! I really wanted Jiraiya for Tsunade...hehe
| Monkey and Music Lover chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
AW! I LOVED IT SO MUCH! THAT WAS SO CUTE! SO VERY VERY CUTE!
| Yomiel chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
Very nice...it's so sad that Jiraiya's dead in the manga now. I wonder how Tsunade will actually react when she finds out about his death?
| Zelda chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
thatz soo good and itz really deep. btw is that all?