Reviews for Melted
Madam'zelleG chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
I'm not at all familiar with this fandom, but this was really cute.

You described the heat of the day very well and I could really picture what was going on, though I would have liked to have more of a sense of Riku's discomfort. You do a bit of telling rather than showing in the beginning. This could be easily fixed with a few sensory details. I just think that it has a lot of potential and I would have liked to see a bit more.

Overall, this was adorable. I liked this little snippet between friends. Keep up the good work!

Justice Tokidoki chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Very cute one shot. Its funny how you make the most banal scene interesting.

Again, it was written very well.
Hopeless romantic chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
that was very good, I loved how vivid your description of the heat was, not to mention I particularly liked how simple your ending was.
NoireInTokyo chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
This was awesome! Really well written, and it wasn't cheesy, either. You kept both Riku and Sora ridiculously in-character and made it really believeable. Nice work!
SuperSailorDarkness chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Aw! that was so cute!

i want a Riku that will buy me icecream... _
hakei chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Reading this fic..reminds me of today, when the sun was beating down on me and trying to melt me to the sidewalk. D: Horrible experience. I know how you feel Riku! :

I love your writing style! Continue on the good work!
Wends chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
Sorry, too lazy to log in.

One word - cute.

Nice read, and does hold its own beautifully as a one shot. :)