Reviews for Flowers
Amaranta316 chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
I like it when Pansy hold the bouquet of black flowers in front of Hermione... it was very charming :)... I was almost swooning when she was reminded that gloves were needed.
Darkshadow-lord chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Interesting One-shot!
starsarefalling chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
continue... that's all I can say.
Don't forget to breath chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
I really love it! xoxo
ScreamForSOH chapter 1 . 9/23/2008

You should update it. ;)

Oh, and the formatting needs fixing. Double spacing is required on ff.n or it clumps the paragraphs together and it's hard to read. .

Good ficcie but.


(this be Scream-Deafening but. hehe)
jupitersthunder chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
WHY does it end there? anyways that a good oneshot.
ayehoneyx chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
anon chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Haha, I love it - "I think they might be poisonous!" Possibly the most quotable line ever... I can't stop snickering.
ty.soglasna chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
Hah, I think I've read this story before...but apparently did not review it. Tsk. Well, I really like the way you characterized Pansy and Draco's relationship, and that one line, about how everyone thought Hermione was after Ron, but not even she believed it - that was really good, the kind of thing that just rings really true... The sex did come on a bit suddenly, I think, but it wasn't badly written or anything. Quite to the contrary. And I like the flower theme, it was cool but not overdone :)
DreamingOfMyGirl chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
O.o? okay, for one, you need to seperate the new sentences and paragraph more just to show its not one bit huge paragraph. Secondly, as for your writting you need to add more detail in each sentence. remember that the characters are supposed to read like their alive, as if its you that going through their roles. as for the sex scene it was lacking in a major way. it just seemed... like a porno fic. expand on what Hermione's emotions would be like, what she's feeling and/or thinking.

anyways good luck with the future writing.