|Reviews for The Syndrome|
| SapphireKageKyuura chapter 6 . 8/6
Do you have to put an input to everyone's pasts and how they met Kagome? It should be more centered on how Sesshomaru's gonna woo Kagome.
| SapphireKageKyuura chapter 4 . 8/6
Lmfao his beast is showing him the girl he wants. Now all that is needed is for Sesshomaru to realize that she's the one for him.
| SapphireKageKyuura chapter 3 . 8/6
Awe poor Sesshomaru. Maybe if he wasn't so violent with Bankotsu, Inuyasha, Miroku and Shippo, he might actually have Kagome's full attention, love and affection. Does he get with her? I really want to know! Good story so far, good job keep up the good work!
| Undertheskys chapter 2 . 7/23
i wasnt expecting bankotsu, i thought it was sesshomaru
| MotherDragon8581 chapter 57 . 7/1
Thank you for the wonderful story!
| nightawakens chapter 1 . 5/3
I read this story over and over again, I love the way the characters are and the way you put this story together. Cannot wait for you to write another story like this.
| Amanda chapter 23 . 3/14
I know you have already finished this story, but I have to put this. I really hate this chapter. I was mostly enjoying this story, but this chapter killed it completely. I can't stand when authors make their characters do things that is not something they would normally do, just to have a very obvious and over used plot twist. The whole Sesshoumaru attacking Inuyasha and Kagome only seeing the end of it and instant blaming Sesshoumaru is so annoying and I saw it coming a mile away. I had hoped you wouldn't do it, but you did. I'm kind of upset because I just can't read it anymore. I'm not trying to be mean, but maybe in your future stories... Do something that not every single freaking author has done...
| Guest 23 chapter 22 . 1/5
I wanna start off with saying that my opinion doesn't count for much considering I didn't get through the first chapter. I find most of the main characters' personalities to be believable except Kagome. Maybe it's that I can't wrap my head around her swearing so much or the all around strange vibes I'm getting from your portrayal of her personality but, I just can't get past it. I'm sorry. From the other reviews I've seen, many people love your story, and that's awesome. I feel bad that I couldn't push through and give your story a shot. I hope that you keep writing though, I can see that a lot of people like your stuff *thumbs up*
| Chisai chapter 51 . 11/26/2014
I've read this fic before. I loved it...but now reading it again... Twas so unreasonable some of the shit Sessh was called an ass for... For telling Yasha he was a nasty pig is not smn u call him an ass for. Idk bout ur homes but someone cannot throw down their shit n not get chewed out. Secondly, he didn't lie to Kagome all. He lied to them but not her. N its not fair for them to do that.. It would have been better to ask him about it first if they truly liked her or even cared about her. Sigh I like the fic but them small stuff irrittate me to no end
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| Megumi-chan3 chapter 4 . 11/19/2014
In chapter 4 of all the fucking names you just had to chose Megumi! Other then that your a good writer. Ja ne!
| Bee chapter 22 . 10/27/2014
I am loving the chapters! I like how you go back in the years and explain how it all came about! I look forward to each and every chapter wondering where it will take us next!
| jaimed1968 chapter 6 . 8/24/2014
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| Purplediamon chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
Hey was that three witches thing a Macbeth reference?
| Guest chapter 57 . 7/20/2014
This is one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I think you are an amazing writer.
| FiresDance09 chapter 29 . 7/18/2014
Oh my god I LOVE the part. This whole story has made me smile and laugh.