Reviews for Forgive and Forget |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nice story update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aside from feeling a little rushed and a few details that didn't make much sense, this isn't bad. You should definitely keep going with it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Michelle, That's really good, you just GOT to be more creative with your writing. You should read the new story i'm writing. I'll email it to you. It's called: The Guardian Anyways, i know you'll probably enjoy it, i just gotta finish typin' it up now. I'll probably have to do that this weekend or something. Anyways, Just get more creative, detailed with your writing, and you'll be good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story can't wait til I read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey keep going...DUDE! her burning that one dude was AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HEY! I WROTE THAT! BOOYA! good job kiddo! *wink* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey kiddo! That was really good. Bad thing is, Logan can't really get a tattoo, due to the fact he has the healing factor. But i guess some people can just deal with it. Its a good start! Keep going! Ragazzino. |