Reviews for Awfully Wedded Husband
Guest chapter 9 . 3/23/2018
in chapter 9 bellas says that she doesn't know why shes acting like a baby...but heres the thing, shes been acting like a stupid, jealous, moron the entire story.

If she doesn't like the pink dress all she has to say is that she isn't wearing that shit. If her sister fucks a guy she likes bella should slap the bitch. When bella walked in to dinner to find that Edward was with HER SISTER she should have outed the whole situation right there at the table with everyone listening. Don't hide shit, it doesn't help.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/23/2018
Why would bella want Edward? HE GOT WITH HER SISTER THE VERY NEXT DAY! LIKE HOURS AFTER HE FUCKED BELLA!

Why would bella want him back?/ Hes been with her SISTER! that's not something you do!
ifairyu chapter 13 . 11/3/2010
WTF? YOU DECIDE TO DISCONTINUE IT RIGHT WHEN IT WAS GETTING TO THE END? THE GOOD PART? GAHHHHHHHHHH IM IN TOTAL SHOCK AND ANGST RIGHT NOW CUZ I JUST WANNA KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWW
gldlys chapter 13 . 8/8/2010
wtf is wrong with people on this... you can not quit! okay because even though yeah there are people that hate this story there are people that LOVE it so don't quit
BehindEverySmile chapter 13 . 3/26/2010
WH-WHAT? WHY? NO! REWRITE IT IF U WANT, BUT I WANT AN UPDATE. PLZ?
BehindEverySmile chapter 6 . 3/25/2010
POOR BELLA! AN WHAT A SISTER KERRY IS! LOL! AND BELLA WITH VAN? LMAO! :P
Bella S chapter 5 . 1/1/2010
i am aware that you ended this story. but i must say you are an amazing writer!

I read your previous story

and I know This isnt my place to say. but you should defintely finish this story!
bellandeannedwardfan78 chapter 12 . 4/18/2009
i can be patient but u cant just leave me hanging i want to see the sibling rivalry lol hell i have a sister that kinda reminds me of kerry and i kinda relate to bella though i never had a one night stand and left him the next day but hey having a sister is close enough lol my sister ugh at my wedding acted like she vwas the bride instead of me it was infurating lol but thank god thats past but i want more i will wait just please dont quit pleasebtw love the story and want more asap when u r done with school or whatnot
bellandeannedwardfan78 chapter 13 . 4/17/2009
i am sorry u quit writting this story if ppl are harsh then its their problem and just to ignore the harsh complaining to me when someone does that they are just jealous that maybe your story rocks and so instead of saying things like your story rocks they would rather make themselves feel better but i hope u dont give up and either add on to this story or redue the same story so it has an ending
Princess Procrastinatora chapter 13 . 4/2/2009
DUDE! Its 5:30 in the morn and i'm reading this story like its good for my health only to reach the part where the 'meltdown' should begin and i find you've discontinued the story! Pull me outta this miserable curiosity and update. i'll wait. puhleze? l
fredweasleyismyking chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
I love this story! please continue it! i'm so gutted! You stopped on such an amazing part! And i have to know how it finishes! Jess x
omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway chapter 13 . 1/30/2009
WHAT? No. You can't just do that! Do you know how long it has taken me to find a decent story? I went through all my bookmarked stories before I found this one and said "hey-finally! Someone with originality!" I'm so freaking sick of the boring "nerdy Bella falls in love with player Edward but he doesn't know she exists" stories!

I go to school where I'm bored for 4 hours before going to lunch and sitting with "friends" who just ignore me when I try to talk to them about something other than gossip and just sit there doing my homework because I have given up. I finish up with school, go to rehearsal for the school play where I am the only one there who isn't completely socially awkward and inadept at making even SMALL TALK, and then I walk a mile to go home in the snow. I log onto fanfiction to ESCAPE my mundane, miserable life and I start reading a story that I really really like. The characters are well developed and loveable, the vocabulary does not include chat speak, and not ONCE are the phrases "where are you at?" or "you did good" or "me and so-and-so" uttered. I get to the last chapter and I find out the freaking story is DISCONTINUED. Wow. You are the first person who has made and then ruined my day all in one, awesome story.

You are such a talented author. I don't just say things like that. Honestly-you are probably one of the best writers on this site. You stay in character while adding your own touch to each of the characters. I know people who would do disgusting deeds in order to have that talent. Please don't waste it.

I sincerely hope you finish this story. I know some little high schooler from Maryland probably has little to no impact on your writing career, but for the sake of bored readers everywhere, finish this story. Thanks for reading this ginormous message, and I hope you reconsider.

-Simone (Sarquan)
omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway chapter 12 . 1/30/2009
Haha poor Bella.
omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway chapter 11 . 1/30/2009
Hahahahahahaha! That WOULD happen to Bella. LOL
omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway chapter 10 . 1/30/2009
AWW! YAY!
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