|Reviews for Merits|
| Sandra517 chapter 53 . 10/3
Please update i love this fic
| InItToWinIT chapter 54 . 10/2
Cool. There's no other word for it. I'm imagining Toph's rave-energy-harnessing thing, and it was way cool. Aang and Toph always make a great team.
Your description of Ozai gave me the heebie jeebies. I'm picturing this rotting, disgusting dude instead of the usually handsome man and its a great change even though it makes me shudder. It fits perfectly.
At least Jet got his redemption in the end. I felt bad for him.
I like how you had Katara ask for help but justified it. She (and Zuko) can't always be strong for themselves. Its OK to ask for help.
| YoungVolcanoBlood chapter 54 . 10/2
This is getting intense. Who the heck is 'Kaiser Sousei' ?
| SMILE chapter 54 . 10/1
I can't wait for more :)
| PurseMonger chapter 54 . 10/1
You did a good job explaining Jet and all his demons but I felt no sympathy at his death. I just can't get over the fact that he raped her and tried to impregnate her to force a bind between them.
I really liked the scenes with Toph and Aang.
Sokka just asking Mai and Tai Li to walk away was awesome. And then of course Suki keeping his ego in check.
| LivingInSymphony chapter 54 . 10/1
Oh don't you worry, my eyes were fine ;) I tried to slow down my speedy reading so I wouldn't catch up so fast! Haha :)
This chapter was excellent! I KNEW Jet was her protector! It's to bad she found out this way :(
Also I'm drawing a blank at who the last two people are lol I know I'm forgetting some people xD
Can't wait until the next chapter :D
| LivingInSymphony chapter 53 . 9/27
Wow! Okay so I just read all 53 chapters in 8 days, I couldn't stop reading!
I am in love with this story! The writing is excellent, the characters are all progressing at a believable pace, so is the plot as well actually. It's just an overall great read! I am so excited to see what happens next chapter.
| Guest chapter 53 . 9/23
God im happy that you update this is one of the best fics ive read
ssoo original its perfect keep it up
you're an excellent writer
| the Moon our Witness chapter 53 . 9/17
Gosh, this story is just too awesome and I can't stop reading, I read the whole story in the last few days. Usually I don't even like AUs of Avatar, but this one got me hooked quickly. But gosh, I hate Jet so much. Why does he need to have a bond with Katara too? I sincerely hope he pays for everything, badly! He doesn't deserve to have Katara as his soul mate... I keep my hope up that Katara is not Kena from his memories, this would just be too much.
| the Moon our Witness chapter 39 . 9/16
Hmm I don't quite get what kind of memories Jet wishes Katara would regain? Or is he talking about the failed attempt at turning her?
| the Moon our Witness chapter 35 . 9/15
What a complete and utter Bastard.. I can't believe Katara willingly returned to the house they were staying in.. and doesn't a pill usually help against unwanted pregnancy up to three days?
| Kslamm chapter 53 . 9/12
A lot going on in this chapter! I had to re-read it to visualize everything. I love that there was a lot of action and the story is moving along to the big Ozai/Zuko reunion. I'm happy the next chapter will be coming soon.
Glad you appreciated the recipe! I can't get enough of it.
I love this story! Until next time!
| nephertiri chapter 53 . 9/11
Wonderful addition to this awesome story! Nothing like sitting down and re-reading everything all in one go!
Your writing is very fluid and it makes me feel like I can actually see every scene happening right in front of me. Nicely done. This is great work and I can't wait for the next addition. It's the final countdown to the showdown. Sweet :-)
Also, Katara might be able to get out of this without fighting. I mean, we can't underestimate the importance of boooody language...HA!
Sorry, I couldn't help myself. Ursula has a lot of great quotes :P
| Lemniscato chapter 53 . 9/11
Whoop, shit is about to go down. Why is Toph having a concert thingie, though? I don't really understand.
| InItToWinIT chapter 53 . 9/11
Yay some action. I like Azula's speech - very smooth. I was hoping Katara and Zuko would meet this chapter but of course not! Can't wait for the next bit!