Reviews for Forever Gone
immortalwizardpirateelf-fan chapter 10 . 7/30/2012
Personally if I were Bella and knew all that Jacob did I would not want to ease that fucker's conscience. He doesn't deserve it. What he did caused long lasting effects on everyone involved and cause two women to pretty much have ptsd for the rest of their lives. You can't tell me that majority of women who are raped don't have ptsd in some form. She should have said "Rot in hell you mother fucker. Have fun while Lucifer rapes you up the ass while taking a tree branch and shoving it up his ass.
CorBen chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Good start!
dragonlady123 chapter 6 . 1/9/2009
i'm sorry but this is one of the worst fanfics I've ever read. There is no way that Jacob would EVER do that to Bella and that is definitely NOT the way that Edward would have reacted
Miss-Charisma-cullen chapter 10 . 10/11/2008
wow this was really depressive but to be honest it was really good to i think this story was really need to show that not everything turns out ok Great job im looking forward to reading more of you stories xox bye
SacreJambons chapter 9 . 9/23/2008
That was an incredible story...so good. you are an awesome writer!
mymarlena chapter 4 . 8/11/2008
Even though that is ridiculous and impossible, I'll keep reading. Just for your sake.
darlingtigerangel chapter 9 . 8/10/2008
I really enjoyed this story it was quick read but enjoyable all the same. It was very well written and creative. I'm glad I had the honor of reading it.
EdwardlovesErica chapter 10 . 7/21/2008
OMG! I love you! u killed jacob! yay!
catsrule chapter 10 . 7/6/2008
you might want to revise this...

third paragraph,

and some other things i missed!
Incandescent Adolescent chapter 10 . 7/1/2008
I love this fic!

I wish it was longer though...cuz it was so good!
Werewolf Luver246 chapter 10 . 6/25/2008
I think the story is really good. You're an excellent writer and this is nothing personal. I just found it hard to finish this story. Being totally dedicated to the werewolves, this totally broke my heart. I hope you continue to write wonderful peices.
Werewolf Luver246 chapter 8 . 6/25/2008
What? I thought Jacob died? My emotions can't take the trauma! Write more so I can save my sanity! I love Jacob Black!
Werewolf Luver246 chapter 6 . 6/25/2008
No! Jacob can't die!
dark-haired-girl chapter 9 . 5/29/2008
that was really sad but beautifully written. poor bella, this almost made me cry and thats really hard to do.
14Square11 chapter 10 . 3/26/2008
Hi!

Great story, great writing - though usually I wouldn't have believed Jacob raping Bella, the way he 'lost control' and everything seemed to make sense.

Err.. I'm just gonna nitpick though. In chapter 10 (the authors note thing) theres the line

"Because Jacob raped Leah, they had to fight, and Sam got killed."

Yep... I'm pretty sure you mean Bella, not Leah :)

Thanks!
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