|Reviews for First Meeting|
| Teff chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
lol cute. mara is so awesome i'm glad that people are actually writing fanfic about her and this was very in character. good job and nice story
| alyking chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
I like the thought, it was something that passes through my mind as well.
| Anny chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
"almost certainly married from the faintly defeated look in his eyes"
LOL. Great job!
| Samantha chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
I read the book years ago and loved it. It's not very well-known, so it's not surprising that there aren't many fics written about it. Anyway, congrats on getting the characters of Mara and Sheftu right, or as close as I remember, since it's been six-seven years since I last read the book.
| IDon'tHaveAnAccount chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Great fanfiction! Please add more!
| Princess Aravis chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
That was interesting. I have thought a little of what Mara's life would have been like before the book, and this was quite interesting. well written, too. good job! you should write more Mara fan fics.
| AriaJack chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
I happen to love Mara of the Nile and thought this was a sweet fic. Just one thing. kilts are Scottish, definitely not Egyptian.
| The Blasphemous Contessa chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
I personally love Mara. And I think you were true to the characters of both of them, though I think Mara would have been more likely to sneak into the kitchen. but whatever.
| Tubular Fox chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
You should write more Sheftu/Thutmose. I CRAVE that pairing, but nobody writes it. I guess I can't complain, I don't write it either. T_T But this is great! I really like how you wrote Nekonkh. :3