Reviews for What Night Brought
tabaski chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
rose of versailles 13 chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Wow that was good :) and no u didnt destroy my image of those lovely two women.

I really enjoyed reading it hope u keep up writing other fanfics of those two, i can see tha very good writer with an extremly good imagination :)

xx Rose
GinRinoa chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
cool it was ver nice
Thyrokio chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Nice work, your writing is really good.

"Stop playing with my breast, Yumi."

"Y-Yes, Onee-sama."

Was really too funny!
Wafarasu chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
I love you! Great story! And eh, bills?

Mou...see ya next time...-sniffs-
senshixxl chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Hell..O_O this was definitely a turn on.. XD

I was wondering though - Yumi sounded like she already had sex before..Where did she lost her virginity and with whom? O_O

I definitely like it, when shes the dominant one in scenes like this, so you earned points on that one from me..:D Normally we see her as the submissive type, so this side of her is definitely refreshing..:D

The part with the maid.. XD haha.. I cant imagine being in her place. To stay professional must have cost a lot of effort..:D haha..Way to go, Sachiko, only the whole mansion will know, that you had sex and that it was hell good.. :DD

I liked the end, although I have to agree to one of the comments previously posted - I dont think that Sachiko would have said the word "ass" (not very ladylike)..hmm.. their "action" wasnt ladylike standard too, I guess..*cough*..forget Ive mentioned it.. :)

"To say the kiss was gentle would be like saying the weather is nice in Siberia." - Liked that sentence. Dont know why. Good choice of words. :)

Generally - a nice one. I pretty much enjoyed reading it. :)

Thanks for writing it. :)
darkwhispersdale chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
That was a very enjoyable read, which I cant read your other work:p Which btw I will review It was fluff as you could say and sex *cough* *cough* sorry. But this was very out there and realistic Jx
bettyful chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
you story is very good... i would be happy if you continue it since it really deserve a chapter 2 or more.

hope you can find time for it...i want to read more of your stories pertaining to yumi * sachiko.
Kiros Razer chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
I loved this fic.
yoruyorusan chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
I loved it will there be more?
leeya chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
i love it...

interesting when u make yumi as the 1 who control the situation...

wish there's a part 2 for this...

u know... sachiko's turn... *wink*
reiko08 chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
“I can’t believe this is real.” Yumi said with a content sigh, as she let her head rest on Sachiko’s chest, listening to her heartbeat and blowing hot breaths on Sachiko’s nipple.

“I can’t believe you licked my... ass...”

“I can’t believe you liked it so much...”

“Stop playing with my breast, Yumi.”

“Y-Yes, Onee-sama.”


haha! this really made me laugh.

but it still didnt stop my nose from bleeding non stop!

got to go take iron meds now. im turning pale from lassive blood loss! i really have to let my girl friend read this!
clarec97 chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
That was good Tsuma Chan, but I would very much love you to continue it with Sachiko's partake in Yumi pleasure. I am running out of tissue, me never failed to make my nose bleed, but I am still graving for more. Thank you. Great job
markesellus chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
wow the ending was funny especially with the maid in the hall. lol
Ayou chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
wahahaha! the shooing of the security, the maid by the door.. that was funny.. very sachiko..
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