Reviews for In Short Supply
BlobIsNotOnFanfictionDotNet chapter 6 . 3/1/2008
Do you know I've added this story to my list of things I can't wait until the weekend for? This is awesome, this is probably my favorite representation of Zim's character I've ever found. I ADORE the little notes on Irken culture. Faved.
enakoritsi chapter 6 . 3/1/2008
This is a really great story. It's definitely the best Invader Zim fanfiction I've read hands down. You've gotten all of the characterizations down perfectly, which makes it such a joy to read. I can't wait for the next update :)
IndigoClockwork chapter 6 . 3/1/2008
NO cliffhanger! Why?...All right, I'm done. Boss job, as always. I desperately want a T-shirt that says "Alien fat equals future molt?".
Rambie chapter 6 . 3/1/2008
You ooze with concentrated genius.
Save The Donuts chapter 6 . 3/1/2008
"Dad, if you ever read this, I DO NOT know that from personal experience! I heard it at school, okay? Okay"
alan is stupid chapter 6 . 2/29/2008

The Zim angst. I love it so.

I liked the spelling errors in Dib's notebook, too. Hehe. You really wouldn't expect it from such a bright kid! His comment to his Dad about never watching a porno made me laugh. :3

Git dem Tallests, Zimmy!

killerdoodlebug chapter 6 . 2/29/2008
This is probably the best mpreg fic I've ever read in the entire fanfiction archives.
Dlbn chapter 5 . 2/26/2008
Cheephookeria...thats amazing...hehe...Nice job with keef there. That was funny. he's that oblivous.


DeterminedX2 chapter 5 . 2/25/2008
"What is the meaning of this?" Zim demanded, gesturing wildly around the room.

"I think we live here..."


Haha... I loved that.

Once again, an amazing chapter. You're doing an excellent job keeping everyone in character despite the subject matter. I really like how well thought it is- with the measurements, Irken past, etc.

Why haven't I put this in my favorites? Well, it's definitely going in there now.
keeperofcoldtoes chapter 5 . 2/24/2008
You have absolutely no idea on how much the readers of this fanfic love it so. In fact, I believe that half of the people reading it would threaten to commit suicide if you don't update. *cough* *cough* Of course this is merely rhetorically speaking. *hides gun behind back*
shannello chapter 5 . 2/24/2008

you've really thought this out. :D

i love when people write like this. stories like this.

you have awesome creativity to come up with something like this. and it's great to have something to read other than the miles of ZaDr! that's been cultivating the archives. yes. you're something else.

zim and purple. PURPLE. wow.

and his personality is so... perfect. PURPLE. it fits him. so GOOD.

well. update soon. please.

because i need more of this.

a lot more. :D
Jack's Dark Apprentice chapter 5 . 2/23/2008
WOW... Zim will do anything to make his Tallest happy, even Tallest Purple told him that his mission is a fake. Well I hope Zim will be alright! I hope he won't be killed along iwht the smeets... Update soon please.
alan is stupid chapter 5 . 2/23/2008
Poor Zim... TT_TT I hope he doesn't die. Ha, Keef likes Zim! xDD But, you know, kudos to him for realizing that Zim's an alien. I never thought it was in him. You know, I'm curious as to how you're going to make this a ZAPR. It certainly doesn't seem even remotely plausible at this point, so I'm sure it must be a challenge to write. Also, the tenth rule thing... I wonder why Red made that rule... Maybe he just really cared for Purple enough that he wanted to share his glory? Something tells me that this isn't the last we'll hear about that rule... OH! And the exoskeleton covered in skin theory really was well-thought out. You seem to have put alot of thought into this, and it shows. Innyhoo, great chapter, I hope chapter six comes soon!

BarkingPup chapter 5 . 2/23/2008
Bwahahahahaha, fear the LOGIC!

Ah, yes, even re-reading it's still good. And the stuff between Zim and the computer are still hilarious.

Myup, just poped in to reveiw. You already know what I think, anyways.
P.A.W.07 chapter 5 . 2/23/2008
Oh the irony of the last line there.

I must say that Keef knowing Zim was an alien was quite humorous. I hadn't really been suspecting that, but it was certainly an intresting add in.
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