fun story, made me smile

xD LOL, funny.

though I think ch. 1 was better this chapter was still good to . keep on writing

Aw such a funny story. Some of the characters are ooc (like esme) but that is what makes it so funny. I laughed pretty hard in the first chapter with Emmett and his images of Rosalie. HAHA

Please update soon!

Very funny.

hehehehehe Carlisle keeps on grounding all of them! oops

so funny hehehe Emmett's thoughts.

This story is so funny! Why haven't you put more up? I LOVED IT!

C - YA LATER ALLIGATOR!

Hehe! I LOVE IT! Poor Carlise's desk. I feel bad for it. :S It would be just so easy to break the poor thing... And, sometimes, satisfying, depending on the day. And I loved the whole Jacob saying that they don't deliver. "It's not Bella, it's Digorno's". (sp?)

LOL! Poor Carlisle! It would be funny if Jacob or Bella Broke it and Esme said "YOUR GROUNDED!" Even though they don't live there. And how is Bella going to break the desk?

Wow, good idea, but can you put a bit more Carlisle into it? Like how he feels each time his desk gets broken? And once again, Edward's middle name is spelt M-A-S-E-N. MASEN. M-A-S-E-N. MASEN!

Great. As usual!

Keep writing!

Kirs XD

I love this story-keep writing! One little thing: you seem to use the word "screamed" a lot; maybe you could try to mix that up a little. Awesome job, though!

great ch 2

That's hilarious! I can't wait for the next chapter!