|Reviews for Back to the past|
| Midnight's Gale chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
It's quite a good story plot, in my opinion, but maybe you should put in more details - like how Konoha was destroyed in the first place, how many years had passed since the battle at the Valley of the End and how did Sasuke come to lead Sound and who killed Sasuke and the rest of Sound in the first place and those Leaf-nins who had died. Maybe you can put in flashbacks for more story detail then just summary.
Anyway, this is just my opinion, but personally, I think that maybe you should make your chapters longer. And on a side-note, can you review for one of my stories; Different Beginnings?