The Trial of Arthos is amazing. I’d be fascinated to see how the world would look post-artifact usage. Very good for a fleshed out story. It’s like using a death note.

This needs to be expanded! This is so original and brilliant!

Awesome! Hope you make a full story to followup his years at Tintagel.

bonnes fics

"I'm jealous."
*envious

This was fabulous. I especially love how strong the wards are. And Tintsgel sounds like a cool school

The story was good aside from Hermione bashing. His most loyal friend in his fourth year, the only one who stood up for him, and he dumps her.

I'd like to see a sequel to this of Hermione's revenge on Harry, reminding him of that loyalty that he refused to show in return to her.

But, what happened to his 'old friends' in Britain? I know you said Harry didn't care about them; but, that doesn't mean we don't. A little paragraph or blurb would have been appropriate, because at the end I was left wanting and full of questions.

I love all the world building in Chapter 26. The hostels and housing situation were especially interesting to consider. I think this more studious Harry will do well with adult students around him. Ironically, he and his educational path will be better supervised as a day student than a boarding student at Hogwarts.

I was surprised by his visit to South Africa. I was starting college and therefore inattentive to many details in world news stories at the time when Apartheid ended. I wonder how stable or organized of a vacation spot South Africa would've been in August 1991?

If your muse ever inspires you to write more about this world, I'd sure be interested in seeing it! I liked how your side characters were so well fleshed-out even when they were only briefly seen. I especially loved Harry's meeting with Mr. Botts. I also loved the mix of frustration and fondness implied by McGonagall's quote. Thank you for the fun chapter!

Interesting.

The Azkaban story was intriguing. I really liked this final chapter.

Wow. I like this way of Harry dealing with his enemies.

I love that Lestrange was strangled to death by a sweater of all things, that’s hilarious

I loved this little story. In my ideal happy world, you’d have found a way to at least inform brilliant muggleborm that Hogwarts now sucked (ie Hermione XD) so she and Harry at least meet and a friendship could start. by Harry running into her at the bookstore in Diagon, and her asking if he was also Hogwarts bound.

Still it was quite enjoyable. Thanks for writing.

Loved some of these so much!

The stupid peter one was so good! Had me laughing all day!

Thanks!