Reviews for Common Sense
LWJ2 chapter 10 . 10/31/2014
I like what you've done with James Potter; I hope you decide to expand it into a full-length novel. Thanks for sharing.
LWJ2 chapter 7 . 10/30/2014
Nicely done, I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.
LWJ2 chapter 4 . 10/30/2014
Neatly done, quite appropriate.
Osmodious chapter 10 . 10/29/2014
I really enjoyed this 'Fathers Love' series...would love to see it fully developed into a novel-length story someday (though I'll guess your interest is gone now that you have wrapped it up). Some great ideas in the 'gentlemanly ruthlessness' of James, the development (so far) of the boys' personalities, the depiction of the goblins, stuff. Thanks for posting it!
furface294 chapter 2 . 10/28/2014
What an absolutely evil concept, I loved this chapter.
Aries Christensen chapter 11 . 10/26/2014
I always wondered why Harry did not suspect the ministry in the first place. Especially since Voldemort told his Death Eaters in the graveyard that Harry was HIS to kill.
ffntfy456 chapter 25 . 10/24/2014
That was fun. Peter does seem to be a character with few redeeming quantities. Competence through laziness?
Charlie0925 chapter 25 . 10/24/2014
I am laughing so hard right now! I LOVED THIS, lol! ;o)
jon reeve chapter 10 . 10/24/2014
Yes, thank you.
noreenklose chapter 14 . 10/23/2014
Great story.
Really loved it.
Polyjuiced Dumbles...who would have thought of it besides you?
Thanks for writing.


noreenklose chapter 13 . 10/23/2014
Most riveting...I'm hanging on the story waiting for more!
Thanks for sharing.

noreenklose chapter 12 . 10/23/2014
Keep it coming!
Lina esrevnI chapter 16 . 10/23/2014
didn't even read it all the way through the seducing the lesbian was dumb but I guess it was blondish sorry I meant bond like. I didn't expect the last bit with the name change
Lina esrevnI chapter 14 . 10/23/2014
I don't care about Dumbledore, but Saber would wants to speak to you about destroying the stone.
Diaspared chapter 25 . 10/23/2014
Peter Pettigrew really is exactly what a bunch of fanfiction authors think Ron is.
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