Very creepy here, and fun but spooky way to see Harry get back at all the people he's always wanted to do it to. Can't wait to see more of these fics.

*Very* well done - sophisticated and intelligent. It's short, but this could be one of my all-time-favorite Azkaban!Harry stories.

Great, that was what I always wanted from Azkaban stories. All this angst and blaming and a lot sorry losers is worth s#!t.

I agree with your point of view in this chapter. Although having Harry "rip everybody a new one" can be dramatically satisfying. I enjoyed the ministry mayhem chapter quite a bit as well. Thanks for writing. W.

Nice work.

Amazing chapter! I love the reaction Harry had to the questions and how he handled Albus and Severus!

You know, I can totally see this happening if Harry was imprisoned. I would totally follow it if you kept it going.

Man I think you ought to do a five years later chapter or something

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[McG] . . . then whispered, “Bad Tinkerbell.”

*snicker*

Highly entertaining scene and a good opening to a Betrayed!Azkaban!Harry story. Bunch of good ideas rolled into a small package.

Thanks for sharing.

i seen other Harry in Azkaban stories done like this done better. but it was still a good chapter

Absolutely wonderful. Please continue this story line. I believe it would fit in well with your Gorilla Potter if you chose to. Anywho, wonderful read.!

Satisfying start, thanks.

Two plot holes:

(1) The dementors all left Azkaban by the time Scrimgeour came to office (HP6).

(2) How did Harry get the portkey out of Azkaban?

Nice work. It's not like they'd gather the entire order to free him.

I'm enjoying your snippets, though I be even more grateful to see a longer work again.

One question regarding this snippet: why do you hold Remus in such high regard? Like Hagrid or McGonagall, he was content to leave Harry to Dimbledore's plans in canon. Remus never did anything for Harry beyond being his professor, making him about the same importance in Harry's life as Crouch Jr.

Don't get me wrong, I am a Remus fan. However, the idea that canon!Remus was any more faithful than any other character just doesn't seem accurate to me.

Anyway, enough rant. Thanks for writing!

ZM

I love this! This is much more like what I can picture happening in this situation - I hate the ones where he forgives whoever betrayed him, or saves them after all. This is much better.